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This Thing Called Love

This Thing Called Love – 4 Lines
After feasting on this amazing THING called love all through the NIGHT, we sweetly sip from silver goblets, aged wine rich, red, warm, and mellow, wistfully wishing to delay the threatening dawn that breaks golden, pale yellow. In Wonderland, we woozily waltz - wildly, wantonly, to wondrous Wagner.
12-17-2015 Contest: 4 Lines Sponsor: Silent One Placement: 2nd

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Date: 6/26/2017 8:42:00 AM
A never ending moment, beautifully expressed.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/30/2017 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, my friend, I am so delighted by your lovely compliment! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 4/2/2017 5:25:00 AM
Great piece, Pandita. The last line, especially, is a masterclass in alliteration! Congratulations on your win!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/30/2017 1:10:00 PM
Hi John, it's so good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your always lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 1/23/2016 12:36:00 PM
you sound so tenderly sincere, soft and branded in a deep-thoughtful way. A great piece as usual from a very good friend and poet
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 1/24/2016 3:15:00 PM
My friend, I appreciate your wonderful complimentary words which continue to inspire me! Thank you, Funom. Pandita
Date: 12/23/2015 2:25:00 AM
A beautiful, romantic verse, Pandita. Congratulations for your well, deserved WIN! ;-)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/23/2015 8:40:00 AM
Hi Teddy, thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/22/2015 2:00:00 AM
Superb write n win Pandita.. big congrats! I hv missed reading ur work!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/22/2015 8:35:00 AM
Hi Dr. Sharma, it's so good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your always lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/21/2015 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on 2nd place win! Excellent!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/21/2015 3:12:00 PM
Thank you, my friend, I am so delighted by your lovely compliment! Have a wonderful day! Pandita
Date: 12/21/2015 7:06:00 AM
A Love Feast!! Well done Pandita...a delight to read;) Congratulations on this lovely podium finish! // Wishing you all the very best for Christmas and the New Year:) *** paul
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/21/2015 3:14:00 PM
Hi Paul, I am so delighted that you enjoyed reading this one. Thank you for the awesome compliments. Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year to you and yours! Pandita
Date: 12/21/2015 6:53:00 AM
What a party Pandita you know how to celebrate and you do it with this wonderful win. congratulations!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/21/2015 3:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Michael, for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/20/2015 9:35:00 PM
Now that is night that would be remembered.. congrats on your placement
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/21/2015 3:30:00 PM
Hi John, many thanks my friend for stopping by with your wonderful comments/compliments. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/20/2015 8:26:00 PM
Beautiful, Pandita! Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/21/2015 3:16:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra, for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/20/2015 7:22:00 PM
oooh, such a sensual one, Pandita. ME LIKES. BIG congrats on a well deserved win.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/21/2015 3:09:00 PM
Andie, I appreciate your wonderful complimentary words continue to inspire me! Thank you, my friend. Pandita
Date: 12/20/2015 5:46:00 PM
A Wonderful Love! The alliteration is amazing Pandita! Congrats!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/21/2015 3:17:00 PM
Hi Balveen, thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem and to leave me your wonderful congratulations. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 12/20/2015 4:29:00 PM
pandita, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/21/2015 3:10:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! I always appreciate your kind congratulations! All the best! Pandita
Date: 12/20/2015 4:04:00 PM
Beautifully done, Pandita. I love your writing. Congratulations.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/21/2015 3:07:00 PM
Hi Faye, thank you so much for your kind words which always mean a lot to me! Pandita
Date: 12/20/2015 11:45:00 AM
Pandita what a wonderful write very well conceived and delivered, congrats on your win!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/21/2015 3:19:00 PM
Thank you so very much, John, for your lovely comments and high compliments which I deeply appreciate! Have a nice week ahead, my friend! Pandita "
Date: 12/20/2015 11:23:00 AM
PANDITA, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/21/2015 11:23:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! I always appreciate your kind congratulations! All the best! Pandita
Date: 12/18/2015 3:49:00 PM
Hi Pandita, this is such a creative piece that you have superbly penned! I especially love the Alliteration of the 4th line - genius! It's a winner in my books and a 7! Kika
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/18/2015 3:54:00 PM
My dear Kika, I appreciate your visit, kind complimentary words, and high score which serve as inspiration for me to continue writing! Thank you, my friend. Pandita