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I have lived an incredible two and a half centuries, both humbled and awed of celebration and tragedies. My seed having fed multitudes of hungry squirrels; my gifts in return for my place in this world. A young Indian mother squatted and leaned against me. I absorbed her tears of labor as she birthed her first baby. Texas Rangers hung three brutal murderers from my limbs. I held the rope steadfast, assuring payment of their sins. A happier task given, holding a young girls swing; endeared by her laughter and sweet songs she would sing. My tattoo, the initials of lovers carved in my bark; their passions given in to neath my cover after dark. My last friend succumed to illness, and by six he was carried to the comfort of my shade, where he chose to be buried. I'll join him this day, for on the horizon I see smoke and fire; a good death, for this old tree. Contest: Let's Get Technical (show me your best) Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 1/28/2018 9:44:00 AM
You've given this tree eye's, a heart, a soul and a memory. A wonderful tribute to what we quite often just take for granted. Makes me look at them with a renewed appreciation. Awesome.
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:11:00 PM
Arlene,, Congratulations, in Andrea's "Let's Get Technical contest:)" Loving life's how it goes.... LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2014 5:53:00 AM
I really like the way you personified the tree, taking us through its entire life cycle and all the things it experienced, right through to its rather sad end...congrats on your win!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/28/2014 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Charlotte!.. Hugs, my friend... Arlene
Date: 7/28/2014 1:56:00 AM
Wow a beautiful write Arlene! Congrats on great win dear!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/28/2014 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, sweet Upma!... Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/27/2014 6:48:00 PM
Stopping back with a congratulatory hug....love the new pic...hugs Tim
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/27/2014 7:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Tim.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/27/2014 3:28:00 PM
Intriguing poetry. Arlene. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/27/2014 7:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul, my dear friend. Hugs.. Arlene
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/27/2014 7:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Joyce.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/27/2014 3:09:00 PM
Congrats Arlene! Lovely take on a tree's passage of time, till ultimately honourable death comes along. // paul
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Date: 7/27/2014 2:28:00 PM
I love the story you have told....just wonderful !! :)
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/27/2014 2:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Carrie, dear!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/27/2014 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Arlene...I love how you brought this tree through time.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/27/2014 2:38:00 PM
Thank you so very much, sweet Faye.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/27/2014 12:18:00 PM
Gosh, how did you know I was a sucker for poems about trees? I am not certain that it was technically flawless, but for your meaning and the way you conveyed that meaning, it is perfection for me!!! Congratulations for your second place win.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/27/2014 2:36:00 PM
Wow! Thanks, dear Andrea!.... I will remember the tree thing for your future contests.. Lol.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/23/2014 10:40:00 AM
So lovely, I could as well write endless verse about trees! Thanks for always stopping by and 'getting' me LOL Light & Love
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/23/2014 12:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Debbie.. I love to see what you have come up with! Always a pleasant surprise.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/22/2014 7:03:00 PM
I love the stories of the tree...The tree brings us life...GL......hugs Tim
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/22/2014 8:31:00 PM
Thanks, Tim!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/22/2014 5:57:00 PM
The memories of an old tree. Arlene, this is such a wonderful poem and very creative. A history of life and the trees role in it. Proud until the end and understanding that it is honorable to be claimed by nature. Very well done, my friend.... Robert.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/22/2014 6:06:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Robert. To die a good death, in the end was a great thing to most American Indians.. Hugs, my friend... Arlene
Date: 7/22/2014 3:31:00 PM
you give this tree, more than beauty; you give it life.. so wonderfully expressed and personified.. wow, arlene.. huggs
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/22/2014 3:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, hun!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/22/2014 2:17:00 PM
what a nice poem, it is well written and has a story that all can relate to..the best compliment I can give you is I wish I had written it...bravo to you
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/22/2014 2:25:00 PM
That's an aweful generous compliment, dear Frederic! Thank you so much.. Hugs, my friend.. Arlene
Date: 7/22/2014 2:10:00 PM
Arlene, Im going to fav this one, and I don't do that very often. I just love the history of this old tree, and Ill bet a lot of it would be absolutely true if the tree could speak to us. BG
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/22/2014 2:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara!!.... If old trees could talk, I can't imagine the stories they could tell!.. Hugs.. Arlene

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