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My Cosmic Magnet

You are my  c o s m i c  magnet- a gravitational force pulling in all my senses. You stole my loneliness and gave me hope. When the stars  a l i g n  because all my freedom drifted into oblivion, your sagacity brings forth moments of revelation. I can finally see our universe for what it is- nothing but an adoring premonition of spellbound constellations.                         The twilit cosmos bring forth intimate affections. For we were written in the planets. I hunger for your moon, you crave my stardust. I was born to breathe your breath, you were made to fill my lungs. I was born to bleed in your veins, you were made to trace my silhouette. I was born to feed your soul. For I never knew starvation until you satisfied my appetite. This is our universe... the one place where our love will never cease to exist. July 28th, 2017

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Date: 11/3/2018 8:34:00 PM
Love it, Laura! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Date: 11/3/2018 8:02:00 PM
Beautiful, Lu Loo. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 11/3/2018 12:33:00 AM
CONGRATS Loo/ Love.
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Date: 11/2/2018 5:37:00 PM
Nice win. Interesting cosmic point of view. Well penned, deserved recognition.
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Date: 3/12/2018 6:23:00 PM
Loved it, a well worthy winner, congratulations on your first place... Mick
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/13/2018 3:48:00 AM
Awww thanks sweet Mick have a blessed day :)-luloo
Date: 3/12/2018 5:37:00 PM
I really enjoyed this Laura. Congrats on your win - well deserved!
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Date: 3/13/2018 3:47:00 AM
Many thanks PM, have a great day :)-luloo
Date: 3/12/2018 4:33:00 PM
..."I never knew starvation until you satisfied my appetite...." Damn!!! I love that line Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/13/2018 3:45:00 AM
Thanks John one of my favorite lines too...have a good day :)-luloo
Date: 3/12/2018 3:22:00 PM
I love the passionate imagery. Awesome, Laura. Congrats on your winning poem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/13/2018 3:44:00 AM
Thank you so much sweet Line! I am honored you liked it...be blessed :)-luloo

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