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This Heartfelt Wish

Shoulda been a better man, a better father, a better husband Woulda got a more bountiful blessing, and a lot less vexation Prideful sin requires humble confession Coulda avoided so many curses; unnecessary pain, a double heaping Tasted only tears of joy had I chose to listen With a smile I vow to be a better man, a better son ... a better brother, a better friend Now I choose to be a better human being, a more compassionate soul because — I don’t wish for anyone to be the way I was

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/14/2019 1:34:00 PM
Hello Freddie Robinson, this poem I sense is for all those men to change and be a better father to their children. have a nce day my friend.
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Date: 8/8/2019 10:51:00 AM
amazing piece. It makes me want to sit down and put mu life into order and better myself!!
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Date: 7/23/2019 7:06:00 PM
I think that in your humility and in opening up like this that---y ou have inspired us all here to take stock and do better too!! A welcome challenge and invitation, my friend. Peace, Joy, and Love. ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/23/2019 6:31:00 PM
WOW!!! Freddie what a testimony from you, for you about us (mankind) Blessings N Love peace in your Harvest Write on... James
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Date: 7/23/2019 12:11:00 PM
Hi Freddie, I can relate to your " heartfelt" write. I too share the feelings. I really enjoyed the last stanza. Always great job my friend. Thanks for visiting me earlier today. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/23/2019 11:46:00 AM
Beautiful, Freddie! Blessed adventures in a happier place!
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Date: 7/23/2019 11:18:00 AM
I shoulda been better too...A conscious write for all...
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