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placid pond in the moon's reflection— kabuki dance 1-13-22 HAIKU CONTEST inspired by BASHO only Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Damned I-Be Thirteen Syllables or Less Contest 3-29-16 Sponsor Timothy Hicks *Kabuki, traditional Japanese popular drama with singing and dancing performed in a highly stylized manner. ... In modern Japanese, the word is written with three characters: ka, signifying “song”; bu, “dance”; and ki, “skill.” Kabuki plays are about historical events and moral conflict in relationships of the heart. The actors speak in a monotone voice and are accompanied by traditional instruments. The Kabuki stage is equipped with several gadgets, such as revolving stages and trapdoors through which the actors can appear and disappear. Why are Kabuki actors all male including those playing female roles? Image result…All-male casts became the norm after 1629, when women were banned from appearing in kabuki due to the prevalent prostitution. The most commonly used colors are dark red, which represents anger, passion, or cruelty, and dark blue, which represents sadness or depression. Other common colors are pink, representing youth or cheerfulness; light blue or green, representing calm; purple for nobility; brown for selfishness; and black for fear. Kabuki actors need white powder to prevent color bleeding caused by excessive oil and sweat, with an easy-to-apply, lump-free consistency. Oshiroi must also look impeccable and defined under special stage lights, and provide a stunning contrast to the colorful kumadori makeup.

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Date: 4/16/2016 7:26:00 PM
haha, just saw what you replied to my comment. yeah, I know the feeling sometimes.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/17/2016 3:29:00 AM
I truly mean it Andrea...if you are placed in the top ten it really doesn't matter where. Lol ; )
Date: 4/10/2016 9:47:00 PM
Lovely feel from this short piece. Also liked the picture you chose to go with it. Have you ever been to Japan? My late father went there during the Korean War period. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/10/2016 10:26:00 PM
Yes, I have been there many times because I used to fly to Tokyo and Osaka almost weekly for some time. Osaka is my favorite city because of the river that runs through the city and Osaka Castle which is not far away. I have even visited Tokyo Disneyland one time which was difficult to get to by trains as not much English is spoken but was fun once we arrived. My son is married to a young woman from Japan who is the only one in her family to speak English. The Japanese are polite and generous and kind. I have not seen Kabuki dance however, except on a T.V. program. Thanks Matthew, Connie : )
Date: 4/7/2016 3:37:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/3/2016 12:24:00 PM
Connie, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 4/3/2016 9:36:00 AM
Lovely!
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Date: 4/3/2016 12:54:00 AM
Connie, a big congratulations on your win with this beauty ~
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Date: 4/2/2016 3:30:00 PM
such fabulous imagery congrats on your win Connie:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 4/1/2016 8:05:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Connie. Congratulations on your nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/1/2016 2:19:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Connie..
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Date: 4/1/2016 12:56:00 AM
Connie, I gotta go see the winner list to remember how you placed. But BIG congrats for your win.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/2/2016 6:23:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. I was very pleased to be in the bottom of the top ten. Cheers, Connie ; )
Date: 3/31/2016 12:26:00 PM
You know how I love Haiku, and this one is a pip. Love, daver
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Date: 3/31/2016 10:26:00 AM
Back with congratulations, Connie:) ~ All the best // paul
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Date: 3/31/2016 3:19:00 AM
Congrats Connie! A haiku with Japanese flavor. I dig. I thought there was a cool contrast between the motion of the dance and the stillness of the pond ... had zen undertones too it.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/31/2016 4:10:00 AM
That was part of my intention Timothy. Thank you very much. I appreciate being in the top ten as I know you had some real beauties to choose from! Cheers, Connie ; )
Date: 3/30/2016 6:43:00 PM
Connie, you will do awesome in the contest. Love Linda
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/31/2016 3:03:00 AM
Wow, what a sweet comment Linda! Thanks so much. ; )
Date: 3/30/2016 3:51:00 PM
So pretty, Connie. I wish everyone could win this one. I am seeing many beautiful haiku.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/31/2016 3:13:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. I have a long email I will send you about my knee. I am going to see if you entered this contest. Cheers, Connie
Date: 3/30/2016 3:31:00 PM
I get the feeling of a very calm and romantic image here, Connie. I also have a feeling that this could well be a winning haiku:) ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/30/2016 1:44:00 PM
Connie, a wonderful haiku lady good luck :)-luloo
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Date: 3/30/2016 7:43:00 AM
Connie, this is beautiful for the contest !
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Date: 3/29/2016 11:42:00 PM
Excellent haiku. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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