They Sing - the Tritina Style

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~They Sing~ (The Tritina) This morn I seem to hear the warblers sing And it is one of the loveliest things To think they build their nests among the trees Then you can hear them singing from the trees And with such melodious voice they all sing While my mind think then just beautiful things When warblers sing I dream of many things Sometimes I just catch them flying from trees And as they soar the sky one of them sing It sings while I think of things, birds and...trees. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 July.08.2016 ~Author's Notes: The " Tritina " is related to the Sestina and apparently is a twentieth-century invention.

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 7/9/2016 2:21:00 AM

This is very soothing to read. I felt as if I was in another world. The tone is just beautiful!!!! I really enjoyed reading this one!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/11/2016 12:02:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly,Pace Ink-U-Script,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D