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Here's a poem on white with pen of blue With words chosen to feel me feeling you Hot wet kisses in ink will ignite our bodies afire Ballet dancing in bed brushing strokes of desire Pen on paper don't cry love the way you do So I'll write this one especially, " All Over YOU "

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Date: 12/15/2019 9:33:00 PM
Very good. So nicely written. God bless you
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Date: 12/3/2019 12:44:00 AM
I like this! Very original idea well expressed!
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Date: 9/2/2019 9:56:00 PM
Awesome. My type of poem!!!
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Date: 3/3/2018 11:05:00 AM
Delightful, with just the right touch of eroticism. Congrats on a fine composition.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 3/3/2018 11:15:00 AM
I think so too...Just enough for the message...Thank you, Paul...All the best to you...
Date: 2/26/2018 9:15:00 AM
Hello Micheal, that is a very hot pen you have. have a nice day my friend.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/26/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Darlene...It's was a wonderful feeling writing it...
Date: 2/26/2018 9:03:00 AM
Sizzling pen... enjoyed it... nicely done
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/26/2018 9:06:00 AM
Recently I've begun to enjoy the write...Thank you, my friend
Date: 2/25/2018 10:32:00 AM
This poem my friend set my soul on fire, it is beautifully expressed.
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Date: 2/24/2018 2:41:00 PM
Arturo, beautifully written.. ballet dancing in bed, brushing pen strokes of desire... love it and the song is lovely too ~
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/25/2018 8:39:00 AM
A bit of freeing up that write...Thanks, my friend...All the best to you
Date: 2/24/2018 12:35:00 PM
Oh my a sensational saucy poem, artsy passionate ink. Kudos. Pleez do comment my newest poem here too.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/25/2018 8:40:00 AM
Saucy!...I like that
Date: 2/24/2018 10:39:00 AM
Wow! Well-written--and sexy, Arturo! Janice
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/24/2018 12:06:00 PM
All the best...Nice to hear from you
Date: 2/23/2018 11:00:00 PM
Oh my! Very seductive imagery and sensuous rhythm. Beautiful!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/24/2018 12:05:00 PM
Something different...Thank you Susan
Date: 2/23/2018 6:57:00 PM
Exquisite poetry, Arturo. I like this very much.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/24/2018 12:05:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 2/22/2018 9:48:00 AM
Very lovely and sensual my dear friend Arturo. Where would we be without love to arouse and inspire us? Your poetry is a passionate embrace.. This is so beautifully expressed mon ami.. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/22/2018 11:22:00 AM
I'm letting the pen do the writing...I can read after...Always a pleasure to hear from you...All is well...Your last posting was out of this world...loved it...All the best Susan...A big hug
Date: 2/22/2018 9:06:00 AM
This is sweet Arturo. Well written ! :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/22/2018 10:15:00 AM
Gald you approve...Always good to hear from you
Date: 2/22/2018 6:47:00 AM
WOW! Ballet dancing in bed..write a poem..all over you..excellent Arturo. Very well written.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/22/2018 7:01:00 AM
I feel better too...like a resurrection...Have a lovely day Vijay
Date: 2/22/2018 6:44:00 AM
So cute... Nicely done... Enjoyed it...
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/22/2018 6:59:00 AM
I'm glad you did...All the best my friend...Enjoy the rest of your day
Date: 2/22/2018 6:30:00 AM
Very sweet..
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/22/2018 6:58:00 AM
Love my friend is like oxygen

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