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The Wraith

Before the dawn whirling in a grim dream, conception of a haunting howling scream, through slivered moon's eclipse casting a gloom. Beasts wandering eyes of red are agleam shadows amble beyond a massive tomb. A wraith in gossamer veils of blackness walks a dark and dismal path of badness stretching its tendrils over the ghost house threshold of cold disembodied madness. Piteous cries of pain attempt to rouse the passion within the wraith coal shadow. Peering piercing the night like an arrow, lips curling back over its bloodstained fangs. Encroaching blackness savoring sorrow as demon's fade away as despair hangs 9/26/2017

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Date: 10/12/2017 6:58:00 AM
Eve , wow, dark and beautiful, CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 10/11/2017 2:09:00 PM
Such an amazing, dark poem, Eve. Congratulations on your First Place Win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/10/2017 11:02:00 PM
Wonderfully dark and descriptive, Eve - congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 10/10/2017 5:33:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve I knew she would love this one:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/10/2017 8:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 10/10/2017 6:29:00 AM
Congrats, Eve, great poem!
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Date: 10/10/2017 6:00:00 AM
wow, I was so impressed with this poem sweet Eve! thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 10/2/2017 1:38:00 PM
Masterpiece!
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Date: 9/27/2017 8:20:00 PM
Good job Eve and best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 9/27/2017 5:37:00 AM
Great poem Eve! Flows so very naturally
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Date: 9/27/2017 4:49:00 AM
Well written, well executed rhyme poem--best for a win!
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Date: 9/27/2017 4:24:00 AM
Wow Eve, I am impressed you have written such a Dark write! I surely loved reading your amazing poem here this morning! This was a fun poem to read, I love poetry like this, to stimulate the mind in Halloween mode! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/27/2017 3:09:00 AM
Love this dark descriptive write Eve it sent a chill down my spine:-) hugs jan xx
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