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The Woods Are Lovely, Dark and Deep

“The woods are lovely, dark and deep, but I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep” (Robert Frost). The woods know my secrets For I open my heart In this enclosed sanctuary of God As folded branches draw my eyes Upward, ever upward Towards the emerald ceiling With a skylight From which streams The light of heaven Pure and sweet On my face The trees are my counselors Sacred dispensers Of the mysteries of God Sentinels tall and majestic Guarding my hushed sacred hours Of contemplation and renewal The would be silence Sweetly disturbed By the sounds of His creatures Filling God’s outdoor sanctuary With a heavenly hymn of praise Each trail leads me deeper and deeper For my heart longs to be In the Holy of Holies In the very presence of the Creator On holy ground Yes, Yes! He is here His presence Envelopes me After my communion The closing benediction of sunlight Guides me home The thinning trees whisper “Forget us not” stories to me As I pass them by Stories of long ago pilgrims From another time Yet one with me The same Pilgrims in search of sanctuary A place of solace A place of tenderness A place of discovery Where they come to learn The miles left to go Till journey’s end When they must lie down In well deserved sleep Safe under the shadows Of God’s mighty trees Resting, resting Blissful sleep In the Sanctuary In HIS sanctuary In the woods….. For Caleb’s Smith’s In the Woods Contest September 10, 2013

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Date: 10/1/2013 8:48:00 PM
Eileen, awesome & beautiful.............. Love.............. SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2013 7:48:00 PM
You did capture it completely!!!!! Awesome win sweetie....congratulations
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Date: 10/1/2013 4:28:00 PM
Eileen, thank you so much for entering my contest. There is somthing very elemental and spiritual about deep woods and you captured it.
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Date: 10/1/2013 12:34:00 AM
this is a very lovely and spiritual one about the woods. VERY good writing. BIG congrats for your win.
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:11:00 PM
A very nice win Eileen,, always~ Linda
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:10:00 PM
Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Eileen. - Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2013 12:58:00 PM
A wonderful setting you established here. Serenity was laced in the ending...awesome job!
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Date: 9/9/2013 10:18:00 PM
WOW!! This is such a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! You have surely enamored me by the splendor of this incredible poem here this evening! What a phenomenal piece Eileen, truly a stupendous poem, Great Work!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/10/2013 1:19:00 AM
Russell, so good to get a visit from you. I hope you are doing well. Thank you for taking the time to visit and post such kind words. Thinking of you.....
Date: 9/9/2013 7:24:00 PM
What a beautiful description of the trees and peaceful setting of the forest....love it love it.will do well..!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/10/2013 1:18:00 AM
XOXOXOXOXOXOXO....Love you, Love you...You make me feel great!
Date: 9/9/2013 6:00:00 PM
The woods are my home, I understand them well, your poem does them great honour, you have captured the great beauty with your words. Wonderful, I shan't forget this poem. D.N.Read ;{>
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/10/2013 1:17:00 AM
That is great to know, David. It must be so peaceful to live in such a setting, away from the hustle and bustle of this busy world. Thanks for your kind post.
Date: 9/9/2013 5:41:00 PM
I so appreciate the mood of this piece. Reading it I felt calm and in awe. This is a beautiful prayer.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2013 7:41:00 AM
I am blessed, thanks.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/10/2013 1:16:00 AM
:) I'm glad I could give you entrance into His sanctuary with this write, Richard. God bless
Date: 9/9/2013 5:26:00 PM
Or maybe, 'Whispering grass, don't tell the trees, what the trees don't need to know'. There you go, you get two sevens for this write coz I really likes it. You know me and wood. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/10/2013 1:16:00 AM
Hmmmmmmmmmm....Yes, I can see that you warm up and are effusive when it comes to wood, Mr Seal...Why thank you for these lovely comments....
Date: 9/9/2013 5:22:00 PM
The old oak tree had stood, a good one thousand years, had seen much of human love and witnessed human tears, until the axe did fall, upon that tree so tall, by gravitation laws, became a set of drawers, standing in my hall. This poem reminds me of that song, 'I talk to the trees but they dont listen to me', lol
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/10/2013 1:15:00 AM
My dear Mr Seal...Please...please do post these as a poem...It IS beautiful...I LOVED IT, and I do believe it should see the light of day on its own, and not tagged here to my poem comment. If you don't do it, I will! Does that give you the impetus to MOVE???
Date: 9/9/2013 4:44:00 PM
Beautiful ~ & ~ Deep. I feel safe after reading your poem, when thinking of the deep woods. Good luck in Caleb's contest. Eileen, Astoundingly good. Each line finely crafted with a path guiding with light. leading the reader through the woods of God's mighty Trees... I absolutely love this:-) beautiful & graceful in every way... always with love...LINDA
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/10/2013 1:12:00 AM
This post has come from the depths of your heart, Linda, and as such as precious to me. Thank you for reading and posting and bringing me joy. God can be reached everywhere, but there is a special connection to Him that we feel in nature, His handiwork. Glad that you could relate to this. Hugs and lots of love, Eileen

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