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The Up Elevator

The time is fast approaching We'll be on the move once more Our life has had a number of chapters Wondering what's next in store I'm filled with great expectations Can't imagine what lies ahead Really hope things don't turn nasty And one day I wake up dead! Sure would miss all the good things Like watching the kiddies at play Or a picnic in our favorite park Trying to keep the bugs away Must admit there's a couple of things Wouldn't have to worry bout no more Like credit cards maxed to the hilt Or fighting on distant shores No more cares about rush hour traffic Or the noisy neighbors next door Couldn't care less about the World Series Won't care if I don't hear the score Tornados, hurricanes, fires, and floods Would be someone else's worry I'll be sitting in a big easy chair up yonder Absolutely no more reason to hurry The time is fast approaching Knew it would come sooner or later Been ready now for a bunch of years To ride the “UP” elevator

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/2/2018 8:49:00 AM
I'm back from my jaunt over the yonder blue Pacific from this South Pacific island to another. Now Jack my friend, while I loved your poem, you are not getting away so easily - so keep your credit cards handy. You won't be boarding that UP Elevator for a long time - you are having too much fun...Maria xox
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2018 9:13:00 AM
Awwww!!! The sun just came out!!! Maria my love, hope your wee jaunt was fun! So hap hap happy to have you back my Aussie sweetheart!!! Now don't away again without my permission or I'll have to down go there and spank your bum... might do that anyway!!! Love ya a bunch, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 5/2/2018 7:45:00 AM
Fabulous engaging piece dear poet! Wonderful. I love it! Good morning sweet Jackson! xomo HUGS
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2018 7:56:00 AM
Can't wait for my first loving words from my dear dear Mo!!! Good morning my Ottawa love... hugs, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 5/2/2018 5:25:00 AM
Don't be in a hurry...enjoy as much as you can...we're not a 100% sure where the elevator goes or if there'll be a power outage on the way up...All the best ...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2018 5:35:00 AM
Well said my friend... we never know!!! Best to enjoy each day and when it's our turn, wave goodbye with a smile!!! Cheers my friend!!!

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