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The Un-Slug

Hidden between the valleys of his mundane life oozed a seeping river a wearisome wandering unfocused vision of tedium, an incongruous rift lazing amid the taciturn hum spinning at turtle speed tempting the idle grass to ripple. He ached to feel the earth move beneath his slimy girth, to know the rush of speed, the awe of going - too fast being unable to stop, the joy of having to say “excuse me – comin’ thru”, to be the - “UN-slug”. A deep breath a lonely exhale the all too often plea “Hey, wait for me.” fell upon the silence of his mundane life. John G. Lawless ©11/2/2018

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Date: 11/4/2018 12:08:00 PM
Sometimes people wish they could break free of the things that hold them back. I took this as an allegory, John, and it's meaning is quite compelling. Well done! Hugs, Carolyn
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John Lawless
Date: 11/5/2018 6:54:00 AM
Well taken Carolyn. Allegorical nuances tend to creep into my writing as I age...or mature....or.....whatever....thanks for stopping to read and comment.

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