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The Swords Speak - Assassins Brotherhood

The Swords Speak – Assasins Brotherhood Legend says That a killers brotherhood existed During high Middle Ages Fighting for people’s freedom They were called assassins They were persecuted and killed They had a motto to fight for “Nothing is true - Everything is permitted” Their swords speak of freedom They had it Inscribed on their blades “We work in the dark to serve the light, We are assassins” or so it’s said Their lives were for the cause Their blood not their own They were disposable to the society Not considered one of their own But the brotherhood of the assassins Were fighting a war for peace Their aim, assure freedom The Templars, their nemesis But as I said, that’s a myth In the history, It’s just a legend The Templars became the heroes The Assassins were just erased *** January 15, 2017 Free Verse 9th Place in the Contest The Swords Speak Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Date: 2/7/2017 10:33:00 PM
Congratulations Claudia...somewhat on the same frequency of my first stanza ;)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/8/2017 4:50:00 AM
Hi Donna!!! You're right! :) - Thanks xoxoxo
Date: 2/7/2017 1:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win Claudia
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/7/2017 5:10:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Joseph! :)
Date: 2/7/2017 3:09:00 AM
An interesting piece of history was contained within your poem, a worthy winner. Congratulations!
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Julia Ward
Date: 2/8/2017 3:58:00 AM
Thank you for delving into history for your poem. :)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/7/2017 5:09:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Julia... I really appreciate you chosing my poem in your top 10 list. I'm really happy with my placement - Hugs :)
Date: 1/21/2017 3:48:00 PM
A very nice take on the sword legend, best to you in the contest. I enjoyed the read! Caryl
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/21/2017 7:50:00 PM
Thanks a lot Caryl, I'm happy you liked :) Hugs!!
Date: 1/20/2017 12:53:00 AM
Claudia...I like where you went with this...no myth here...like your touch with research you've added...well done and best wishes for the contest!! Big Hugggs. ;) deb
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/20/2017 4:36:00 AM
Thank you Deborah!! I liked how it turned out too... I'm happy you liked it - Hugs back :*
Date: 1/16/2017 1:28:00 PM
Good luck in the contest my dear friend! I learned a lot through your poem.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/16/2017 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Darren! It was interesting finding out the origin of it! Hugs my sweet friend :*
Date: 1/15/2017 4:59:00 PM
Very informative and interesting...I'm going to have to read up on them now.
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/15/2017 7:22:00 PM
Yes! It is interesting... myth based in real facts :)

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