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Sprinkling splashing bubbling Called the blue fountains Golden sunshine fondling The twin rose mountains Handsome catwalk between Brown breath and the blooms Shining chestnuts umpteen Ocean roams the rooms Tipsy tension thickens Flashes and thunders Purple tremor heightens Loosen the anchors Orange moment kisses The ships are back home Notebook holding wishes Quiet the pink dome _____________________________________ February 23, 2018 __________________________ Poetry Contest: 88 Syllables Sponsored By: Joseph May 56 Words: 88 syllables

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Date: 2/24/2018 7:17:00 PM
Such vivid imagery, Probir! Janice
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/25/2018 9:05:00 AM
Thank you, Janice ...
Date: 2/24/2018 11:18:00 AM
Magnificent , Probir, puts mine to shame.. luck in the contest. Hugs eve
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Date: 2/25/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ... but at the second part of your comment, It is I who feel ashamed ...
Date: 2/23/2018 4:22:00 PM
Excellent Probir..a winning entry!
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Date: 2/24/2018 5:26:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...
Date: 2/23/2018 1:07:00 PM
Impressive writing dear, Probir! Good luck my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2018 5:28:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios ...
Date: 2/23/2018 9:44:00 AM
Wow!! Is he going to count all those syllables?? Enjoyed reading your alliteration. Sara
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/23/2018 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Sara for liking my poem ... Probir

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