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The Storm

The storm howls across life fears drip along my spine remembering the day you blew away Cinquain traditional

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Allen Hackett

Date: 9/2/2010 7:07:00 PM

I felt the chill

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/22/2010 4:45:00 PM

Sounds like a wicked storm. Good use of the form! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/21/2010 5:12:00 AM

I love this form and wondrful write Doris..another gem for you!! always Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2010 8:56:00 PM

Hey, this is pretty darn good! Luv, Andrea

Sammy Shaq

Date: 8/20/2010 7:56:00 AM

soup mail!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/20/2010 6:29:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Doris. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/20/2010 4:31:00 AM

Well written Cinquian, Doris! And thank you for your always friendly comments on my poems. Have a nice weekend!...Gert

Sammy Shaq

Date: 8/20/2010 12:38:00 AM

A cinquain traditional indeed, a write that makes you think, makes you think about you and whom blew away. What a mysterious write. Love, Sami.

Marycile Beer

Date: 8/19/2010 7:22:00 PM

Doris, we must have had the wind on our minds today. I wrote two poems about it and possibly one similar to the one you have herel. Mine is not a hum it is crickets I hear and I am glad it makes me think of nature. Thanks for our comments. God Bless, Cile

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/19/2010 7:02:00 PM

don;t know the story behind this but I can see how that storm would howl across your lives. Strong poetic write

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/19/2010 5:54:00 PM

Fine formalist verse here. Have an excellent day! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2010 5:33:00 PM

wonderful Doris, i enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/19/2010 11:31:00 AM

So much truth in your words Doris.. nice reflective piece .. I never tried this form.. but u make it seem so interesting now.. see my two new blogs today.. with luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/19/2010 10:54:00 AM

Storms always brings about change, sometimes unwanted ones, enjoyed this Doris.. love Wilma

John Freeman

Date: 8/19/2010 10:44:00 AM

Yep, the storm is always howling accross life, by the spirit of fear. Nice Cinquain Doris. Thanks, sis for your comments today, they are very important to me. Agape, Moses

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/19/2010 8:24:00 AM

So sad is this Doris, yet from my point of view, wonderful expressive feelings, Harry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2010 7:42:00 AM

Sad reminder for the family..Mom