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The Storm

The storm howls across life fears drip along my spine remembering the day you blew away Cinquain traditional

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/2/2010 7:07:00 PM
I felt the chill
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Date: 8/22/2010 4:45:00 PM
Sounds like a wicked storm. Good use of the form! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/21/2010 5:12:00 AM
I love this form and wondrful write Doris..another gem for you!! always Michael
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:56:00 PM
Hey, this is pretty darn good! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/20/2010 7:56:00 AM
soup mail!
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Date: 8/20/2010 6:29:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Doris. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning. I am hoping you have a wonderful weekend and find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2010 4:31:00 AM
Well written Cinquian, Doris! And thank you for your always friendly comments on my poems. Have a nice weekend!...Gert
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Date: 8/20/2010 12:38:00 AM
A cinquain traditional indeed, a write that makes you think, makes you think about you and whom blew away. What a mysterious write. Love, Sami.
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Date: 8/19/2010 7:22:00 PM
Doris, we must have had the wind on our minds today. I wrote two poems about it and possibly one similar to the one you have herel. Mine is not a hum it is crickets I hear and I am glad it makes me think of nature. Thanks for our comments. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 8/19/2010 7:02:00 PM
don;t know the story behind this but I can see how that storm would howl across your lives. Strong poetic write
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Date: 8/19/2010 5:54:00 PM
Fine formalist verse here. Have an excellent day! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/19/2010 5:33:00 PM
wonderful Doris, i enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/19/2010 11:31:00 AM
So much truth in your words Doris.. nice reflective piece .. I never tried this form.. but u make it seem so interesting now.. see my two new blogs today.. with luv..
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Date: 8/19/2010 10:54:00 AM
Storms always brings about change, sometimes unwanted ones, enjoyed this Doris.. love Wilma
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Date: 8/19/2010 10:44:00 AM
Yep, the storm is always howling accross life, by the spirit of fear. Nice Cinquain Doris. Thanks, sis for your comments today, they are very important to me. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/19/2010 8:24:00 AM
So sad is this Doris, yet from my point of view, wonderful expressive feelings, Harry
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Date: 8/19/2010 7:42:00 AM
Sad reminder for the family..Mom
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