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The Sowing---Repost In Honor of Black History Month

The Sowing Upon the wind feasted hillside The jagged edges of used rocks swell With the fatless skin of babes and wenches Below a field of blood, no less a Flanders Field A continuous swell of rape roll like waves In the pallid squalor of leaking huts wooden tales tell The scars ironed in the backs and inner thighs The voices crying with no listening ear Blood shines bright in moon's glow sons birth upon the fields For eons it seems men stack rape like barley and wheat Small ones soft ones and inexperienced virgins too Daughters bled away dignity men their respect Born work and ravished in the fields Where is their medal of bravery Today the summer sun washes over the fields Each ray eclipses the dark memories of sin As the sons and daughters rise This poem was written for Joann Grisetti's Copycat contest through inspiration of Debbie Guzzi's The Sowing, one of the Greatest writers here on the Soup

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Date: 2/13/2013 8:03:00 AM
powerful write, Joy - and a lovely tribute to Debs
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Date: 2/11/2013 4:15:00 PM
A classic.
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Date: 2/7/2013 7:53:00 PM
Joy, I am so happy to see your post, today! And what a poem it is...Amazing work worthy of praise!! Ah, but it is hauntingly sad. Incredible job, my Sis. I emailed you last inquiring how things were but got no reply. I figured you were still busy settling. It's good to hear from you Joy! Much love to you always. Annalise This I'm going to save to my Favs. List.
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Date: 2/7/2013 7:09:00 PM
Soup mail HUGS!
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Date: 2/7/2013 6:29:00 PM
and hey, long time no see. Good to see you here today.
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Date: 2/7/2013 6:28:00 PM
wow, you did Debbie's poem justice. She will be very proud if she happens upon this outstanding poem of yours, sweetie. So full of imagery for this dark time in history, And sadly it is still going on in many parts of the world, women of all color being abused. I just loved the last stanza. It was beautiful.
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Date: 2/7/2013 11:11:00 AM
Hi this is a very moving write Joy it is a heart tugger luv. missed you where have you been? xx
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