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The Sky Fell Down

The sky fell down Then crashed around me My dreams all drowned Leaving me empty My blood ran cold A poisoned river White pain took hold My body shivered The sun was gone Leaving deep darkness No dusk or dawn Unbroken sadness I stared through eyes Blinded from sorrow With silent cries For lost tomorrows Until you held me in your arms That's all it took.... that's all I neeeeeed..... Ashes to ashes, dust to dust Give me the strength to live and trust Find some real answers, a new direction Hold me closely.... I need some affection..... Empty inside Swallowed emotions I was a shell Tossed within oceans Bruised to the core Edges undefined Washed up ashore In body and mind Until you held me in your ams That's all it took.... that's all I neeeeeed.... Ashes to ashes, dust to dust Give me the strength to live and trust Find some real answers, a new direction Hold me closely.... I need some affection..... Reach out to me and hold me tight Help me to get through one more night One more night.... just hold me tight Help me make it through another night Until you held me in your arms That's all it took.... that's all I neeeeeed.... Ashes to ashes, dust to dust Give me the strength to live and trust Find some real answers, a new direction Hold me closely.... I need some affection..... Ashes to ashes, dust to dust Give me the strength to live and trust Find some real answers, a new direction Hold me closely.... I need some affection..... Jane Shields (C)

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Date: 10/26/2019 8:27:00 AM
WoW! You are wonderful songwriter, Jane. I really love this lyrical poem. Such poignant phrases: The sun was gone. Leaving deep darkness. No dusk or dawn ... Unbroken sadness. I stared through eyes Blinded from sorrow. With silent cries For lost tomorrows. Truly a wonderful song of yearning love. Stellar bright write. Love and more love always.
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Jane Shields
Date: 10/26/2019 8:32:00 AM
Thank you kindly Freddie. Alas I'm not in any way musical, but I know this would make an incredible song. x
Date: 7/27/2018 1:56:00 PM
Nicely written, Jane, love is the greatest healer. All the best. John
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Date: 7/13/2018 7:58:00 AM
Jane, your tempo and rhyme are perfect in this wonderful write!
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Jane Shields
Date: 7/13/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thank you kindly. It was a reflection on how I felt yesterday morning when I woke up. Took minutes to write it down, because I was living it. Feeling much brighter today. x

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