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In my green green salad days I roamed in my thoughts over the universe Immersed with the great writings. Then physically exposed to different cultures Meeting people of different sects and creed Enacted Moliere in his own National theatre of Paris, Oh, the Eiffel Tower and the Chateaus The bard’s residence on Stratford-upon-Avon Robert Burns of Eyre and Walter Scot of Scotland The Dracula palace in Romania, the Alps in Germany Over to Mongolia, the land of Great Chengiskhan On to Los Angeles to stop for a landmark of My Roamings and then of Ramblings in black and white, The modern marvels of Disney land and Cape Kennedy To skyscrapers of Sears and CNN And the journey’s end at Niagara, the Antiope of Canada. Now I am like a remnant of a cloud of autumn Uselessly roaming in the sky O Sun ever-glorious Your touch has not yet melted my vapour Make me one with your light And thus I count months and years Oh, take this my emptiness Paint it with myriad colors with gold. Dr. Ram Mehta *The Roamings is the name of collection of my poems published in 2002. *The Ramblings is the name of collection of my poems published in 2004 ====================================== Third Placement in: Contest: I, Roam sponsored by Drake, Eszes

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Date: 5/28/2011 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on an exquisite entry. ^__^
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Date: 5/28/2011 5:35:00 AM
The last stanza wraps it all up very poetically indeed, Dr Ram. I see you are on the top of the winner's list again and with good reason. congratulations to you!
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:59:00 PM
Congrats... on your win in Drake's contest. Love, gf
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:27:00 PM
exquisite writing, dr ram.. many happy cheers to for your the suoer win! :) hhuggs
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:37:00 AM
Excellent write here Dr.Mehta.Congrats on your 3rd place win....
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Date: 5/26/2011 10:09:00 AM
Simply stunning ! Congrats Dr Ram!...gautami
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Date: 5/26/2011 7:22:00 AM
Congratulations again....
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Date: 5/26/2011 4:34:00 AM
This is indeed must have been an awesome collection Dr. Ram. Many congrats for this big win.
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Date: 5/25/2011 4:11:00 PM
Wonderfully written.It's an amazing write.Congrats on your big win!
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:11:00 PM
Such a wonderful entry to Drake's contest! Congratulations!! wonderful!!
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:08:00 PM
Beautiful prize-winning piece, Dr. Ram. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win, Dr. Ram! Awesome write and I'm so happy for you. Also glad to hear you have been publishing your poetry! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2011 9:39:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Dr Ram : )
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Date: 5/25/2011 7:40:00 AM
Congratulation!!! U deserved the win :)
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Date: 5/25/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your glorious win in I roam contest with this superior write and adventure in poetry my friend.. so honored to be sharing winners list with a premier poet like u luv..
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Date: 5/25/2011 5:18:00 AM
this was a great piece good job on your win in the contest. cory
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Date: 4/29/2011 8:25:00 PM
Amen. though i haven't had your experience, I understand. In short, you will expand, it is inevitable.
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Date: 4/29/2011 2:32:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this excellent work..Enjoyed reading this one this afternoon...Sara
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Date: 4/29/2011 1:41:00 PM
Dr. Ram u have captured the essence of the contest with this magnificent parallel on your life and the roaming theme.. but far from useless my friend with your great gift of poetry to create beauty for us as u share..good luck in the contest luv and happy weekend ...
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Date: 4/29/2011 9:02:00 AM
Nice write, good luck in the contest :o)
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