The Raw Note

Down and deep, the air is thick,
A rich embrace, a warm retreat,
Raw the notes that softly call,
Enfolding senses, tempting all.

It lingers close, the taste unfolds,
Dark and tan, a story told,
Like tides that drift to sands that swish,
A scent alive, the choc starfish.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 11/24/2025 1:33:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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