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The Precious Moments

Bubbling laughter from our lovely lilac Turning moments purple from the grey-black In a dream light we shall be on horseback We will mingle with the jungle fountain Inside your shirt winds from sea and mountain From the pink clouds soon will come down blue rain First I’ll raise a blue sky in your dimple Quick you will make it, your mind so nimble, In mystic murmur the stick and cymbal You gave me many a precious moment In your eyes of lyrics my fulfillment With you my hours a crescent moon like spent In the midst of thorns and thistles these are Chocolate moments of your soft guitar Inviting the starlight from very far __________________________________________ 06/03/2017

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Date: 3/12/2017 8:17:00 AM
Another beauty!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/12/2017 10:07:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/11/2017 6:46:00 PM
I simply enjoy your way of expressing things, I find it just different and enlightening!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/11/2017 7:48:00 PM
Glad you like ... Thank you ...
Date: 3/11/2017 3:27:00 PM
Your poems always take me back to India Probir. A special, unique country you always describe so well in your poetry.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/11/2017 7:55:00 PM
Thank you ... But in this poem what I present is a land every inch of which is my mind's creation, dear sister, but yes, a mind formed through generations that unfolded in India ....
Date: 3/11/2017 10:01:00 AM
This was very beautiful. I liked it a lot :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/11/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 3/9/2017 8:17:00 PM
So beautiful... It flows gently like a breeze... I enjoyed it... Hope it does wel in the contest...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/11/2017 10:06:00 AM
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Date: 3/9/2017 4:48:00 AM
- A delicious poem, Probir - Gives sweet chocolate thoughts on a gray and rainy day :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/9/2017 5:27:00 AM
Thank you, Anne ...
Date: 3/6/2017 8:46:00 PM
Nicely done tercets, Probir, perfect syllable count and rhyme... Good luck in the contest...I truly didn't know what a tercet was until today.. A poetic unite of 3 lines rhymed or unrhymed meter or no meter<3 ~* Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/6/2017 10:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve ... I do appreciate your comment ...
Date: 3/6/2017 6:09:00 PM
The Muse my friend, Probir, has fallen in love with you thus inspiring you to write such a wondrous poem with so many brilliant images that make one remain in awe!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/6/2017 10:28:00 PM
May be you love me and hence the overstatement ... that is fine ... In fact it is the stimuli implied in the contest that has generated the images ... thank you so much ...
Date: 3/6/2017 5:14:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Probir, a joy to read, Roy.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/6/2017 10:08:00 AM
Thank you, Roy ...
Date: 3/6/2017 4:45:00 AM
lovely thoughts you have painted, probir.. huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/6/2017 10:08:00 AM
Thank you, nette ...

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