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The Poetess

. Writing her great pearls Worn with pride everyday But shown clasp broken

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 2:22:00 AM

sara once again and again i love reading you works duncan

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/9/2010 12:19:00 AM

Hi Sara :) I checked your Double Rainbow at writerscafe.org and I really enjoyed it-- I totally agree with you-- what a beautiful sign from God that He is there for you despite the troubles in life-- how wonderful that you were able to witness that--very inspiring and you sure have some gems over there-- it looks like a wonderful place as well-- :) thanks for telling me to check out your poem there-- love your username there :) -- have a good weekend-- nikko :)

Gisele Robin

Date: 10/1/2010 4:20:00 PM

Cute but it's kind of short. It's detailed really good also.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/22/2010 2:08:00 PM

A perfect write Sara!!!! wow this is real good...Love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/21/2010 5:30:00 PM

Wonderful Senryu Sara... this is a classic masterpiece in my opiniion.. a 'one of a kind' poetic write.. enjoyed my friend with luv.. hope everyone is doing better today...Eric will be home Thursday for two whole weeks...luv..

David Smalling

Date: 9/21/2010 1:40:00 PM

Sara, this is exceptional ... the last verse will immortalize this poem forever.

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 9/20/2010 6:00:00 PM

this is fantastic!..you have such a great way of saying so much with very few words!...love it!

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 9/20/2010 3:52:00 PM

Short but sweet. Have a good day dear. It was a pleasure reading your material today. Scarlett

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/20/2010 2:57:00 PM

Hope her pearls don't fall off because of the broken latch. Intresting write! I bleive I meant the gates of heaven. I don't know if i thought that when I wrote it but it crept into my poem. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish(MattCard)

Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/19/2010 7:01:00 PM

this can say a lot. .broken in ways that she is only yet to find out from others who see it. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/19/2010 5:52:00 PM

enjoyed reading today mom...are yall taking it easy? since we did not have church this evening?? I just made some homemade biscuits and canadian bacon and wayne made the eggs.

Michael Gelb

Date: 9/19/2010 4:10:00 PM

Reads good. But what is Senryu?

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2010 1:53:00 PM

HELLO~ SARA ~ENJOYED YOUR ~ INTERESTING POEM~He HE HE! Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read more poems, before my KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you guys. I posted a sad poem as well, hope you find time to read my latest poem*luv~SKAT

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/19/2010 11:00:00 AM

Hi Sara! That last line sure gives this senryu a deeper meaning-- things sure don't seem like they are sometimes.... nice senryu--nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2010 9:37:00 AM

HI,Sara, I really like this. soupmail.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2010 9:06:00 AM

Refresh my memory Sara, who is the rattle snake, I thought it was the evil one,, Now i'm curious,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2010 8:19:00 AM

What fine expressions with great images with nice humor, Sara. This is to be my fav

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/19/2010 3:49:00 AM

Lovely Senryu, Sara, enjoyed the read this morning!...And thank you for commenting my work...Gert

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/18/2010 4:34:00 PM

Lovely senryu Sara. In answer to your comment oon my blog. The bulbs are planted in the fall, bloom in the spring and then must stay in the fields to mature before being dug in the fall and replanted. Last year I had daffodils, the year before tulips and perhaps it will be iris next year. They must rotate the crops to eliminate viruses and other diseases. The true crop are the bulbs but they do sell cut flowers also and every year there is a big tulip tour. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2010 3:39:00 PM

enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/18/2010 3:30:00 PM

Reading a pearl, left for us to enjoy. Excellent Senryu

Constance La France

Date: 9/18/2010 3:29:00 PM

I have my grandma's pearls, and the latch is broken... but I think you are referring that poems were pearls, what a lovely concept...