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The Perfect Day

THE PERFECT DAY What constitutes a perfect day Is it friends who live nearby Or perhaps a fresh cup of coffee And a warm slice of apple pie Maybe it's just a lazy day Where one can do as they please Take a nap or take a stroll Down the lane 'neath old oak trees Could it possibly be a visit From your children from out of state It could even be a fun filled night Because you decided to stay up late Whatever the case may be, my friend It would serve you well To start each day with the Lord above And avoid the gates of hell For the contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 3/12/2018 4:12:00 PM
Love the uplifting imagery, Curtis.Well done and congrats on your winning poem.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/12/2018 7:42:00 PM
Thanks, Line, for all that you do to encourage others. Your support is invaluable and greatly appreciated. Second chances are hard to come by.
Date: 11/23/2017 11:39:00 PM
Great rhyme and flow, a joy to read, Curtis. All the best ... CayCay
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/12/2018 7:41:00 PM
Thanks, CayCay! I missed your response the first time around. Glad to see it now so I can thank you properly for your kind remarks and your invaluable support. Blessings!

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