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The Pencil

It is a graphite instrument created to depict expressions, something to record emotions; bring to light an epiphany- It comes to dear life with ideas and inspiring suggestions, composing intimate feelings with sentimental harmony. It gives purpose to many, bestows passionate directions, the pencil can bring such ease through writing’s affection. It etches on sketch paper such an aria of an intricate design, drafting beautiful landscapes and silhouettes of illustration- And when two abstract lines come together and align, the pencil then becomes the most noteworthy animation. There’s density and types of lead, carbon thickness or fine, and nothing like the magnificence of drawing an outline. I bring to life the pencil and all that it represents in existence, to some a sentence created to others a picture from the soul- We can write or draw without hesitation nor resistance, and with each stroke of carbon we can make our lives whole. For it is only through imagination and with the pencil’s assistance, we can fabricate and originate our senses through persistence. April 13, 2018

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Date: 6/9/2018 1:18:00 AM
Pretty my dear but too many words for me since I do have a hard time reading. But excellent depict.
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Date: 4/16/2018 12:31:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Luloo - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
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Date: 4/15/2018 5:22:00 PM
I love how you glorified the pencil, Laura! Wonderfully written, and congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/15/2018 4:47:00 PM
Wow! No wonder this won Laura. Amazing animation from the inanimate object.
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Date: 4/15/2018 12:38:00 PM
Hey! Back with much deserved congrats on this lovely gem, Laura.
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Date: 4/15/2018 9:49:00 AM
What a beautiful life you have given to a pencil, Laura. Many congrats on you fine win. Elaine
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Date: 4/14/2018 9:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura. Great play of words bringing to life a lifeless object.
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Date: 4/14/2018 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations Laura, well deserved win! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 4/14/2018 12:48:00 PM
WOW! EXCELLENT. Best Luck.
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/14/2018 8:30:00 PM
thank you sweet Anisha :) -luloo
Date: 4/13/2018 9:38:00 PM
You really have way with words! Did you get it from formal training, or is it just natural?
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/14/2018 8:30:00 PM
aww thank you :) I have been writing since I was 10, now I'm 38 so after much schooling and journaling I developed the gift through much life inspiration. Be blessed :) -luloo

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