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R.J. Lindley, 
March 3rd, 1976
Dark Rhyme(The Beast and its faithful allies)

What ails man, lives deep inside

festering in his arrogant pride,
Like a seedling forever up-torn
blackness in him thus born,
Woe to thee, that human breath take
for earth's black lust thee partakes
As Poe saw, the Raven foretells,
human flesh absorbs many hells
And black hearts answer those calls
tho' to hide man builds many walls.

The Path Became Bloody, The Door Forever Was Shut, Part One (Part One) I saw the beast, drew my trusty sword The crowd was there, a ghastly little horde Devoid of dawn and reeking of decay allowing indifference to hold greatest sway. With a mighty blow, the beast was then cut The path became bloody, the door forever was shut. I saw the beast, its eyes throwing flames The crowd was there, playing childish games Beast roared and threw a vicious claw Crowd applauded it, they one and all. With a mighty blow, the beast was then cut The path became bloody, the door forever was shut. I saw beast, its fangs showed through its smile The crowd was there, with lust and usual guile Crying with hearts, black and frozen as ice Shouting kill the man, saying it thrice. With a mighty blow, the beast was then cut The path became bloody, the door forever was shut. I saw the beast, its flaming tail hit my head The crowd was there, laughed the more I bled Taken aback, my courage ate the mighty blow Crowd screamed out, more blood for the show. With a mighty blow, the beast was then cut The path became bloody, the door forever was shut. I saw the beast, slashing out in agonizing pain The crowd was there, shouting man can not win again With final blow, my sword pierced its black heart The crowd rushed forth seeking to rip me apart. With a mighty blow, new beast was then cut The path became bloody, the door forever was shut. R.J. Lindley, March 3rd, 1976 Dark Rhyme(The Beast and its faithful allies)-Part One

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Date: 9/14/2018 11:47:00 AM
Wow! Amazing poetry, my dear friend. I relished the faith and courage portrayed in going against the crowd (beast's faithful allies..), to stand alone and fight the beast. I also enjoyed the profound, beautiful and poetic thoughts in your poet's notes, Robert. Awe-inspiring poetry that shines with the golden light of your superb talent.. I'm eagerly awaiting part two.. Warmest wishes my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/14/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. I see that you understood perfectly the content, message and heart of the poem.
Date: 9/14/2018 7:16:00 AM
Awesome write my dear friend...you da man, Robert...love & light...^WW^
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/14/2018 5:12:00 PM
Thank you my good friend. I am pleased you liked this one.
Date: 9/12/2018 9:07:00 PM
You sure do have a way with words, Robert. A wonderful way that is. Excellent write as always my dear friend. I'll be waiting for Part 2 Best wishes...Charlie
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/14/2018 5:11:00 PM
Thank you my very good friend. I posted the second part today, hope you may enjoy it..
Date: 9/12/2018 6:16:00 PM
"The crowd rushed forth seeking to rip me apart." Hungrily waiting for Part 2.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/14/2018 5:09:00 PM
Thank you my very good friend. As in so many cases the crowd blindly and erroneously sides with the wrong entity.

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