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The Other Half of Me

I look into a mirror and see myself I see one half of me,I see one half fading away from me. the other half all sad,the questions I wanted to say but the words couldn't come out. the broken puzzle leading to my heart. I ask myself,if I wonder if I will ever see you again. I wonder if I will ever see myself whole again my heart is fading away from me. my soul is telling me to save me. I feel that the world is collapsing on me. damn i'm sorry if I hurt you. but my life couldn't be complete without you but please save me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/10/2009 11:01:00 PM
I like the desperation in this...it feels so athuentic and raw...
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Date: 4/2/2009 3:30:00 PM
Truthful read and I loved a truthful read that really stirs the blood of humanity. Thank you for posting it and have a pleasant day.
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