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The Only Star For Me

Love came to me Upon sea pebbles you see. He asked, will you marry me. A silk gown for me, In navy uniform was he. An echoing spirit among the trees Flew down listening to our plea. I do, were said in front of thee. Together we agreed With the sky and our three. Then one day, on my knees I prayed to the spirit within me. Please. He is the only star for me. 11/9/2022

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Date: 11/13/2022 7:58:00 PM
Just a lovely write as your soul is. Not meant to impress,just being Eve… Quite an original write! Pangie
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/13/2022 9:06:00 PM
My husband was in the Army! See..they both served this country. Many hooligans found ways not to serve! They were our patriots and lovers and had integrity! How blessed we both are,wow! PS, thank you much for reading my reply!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/13/2022 8:02:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie, My husband was a Navy man. Do miss him.
Date: 11/13/2022 3:42:00 PM
A moving poem, Eve ~
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Date: 11/11/2022 6:26:00 AM
Very, very nicely done.
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Date: 11/10/2022 12:31:00 PM
Eve, your poetry is beautiful and conveys a lot of feelings. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/10/2022 9:11:00 AM
A Romance ~I got a chill~ all the while Eve, every line excited! BOL
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Date: 11/10/2022 2:00:00 AM
A star that brought romance. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 11/9/2022 6:04:00 PM
Romantic, Eve! -- Even after you got married. You kept the spark alive. Good for you!! ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/9/2022 11:20:00 AM
Eve, your poem is wonderful and emotional, best of luck in the contest
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