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The Note Your Holding

dear friend, i am someone you know. as a matter of fact someone real close. and i'm sending this note to let you know that as a christian i have this hope. i see you around and i think your cool. not like other guys that act like fools. i see that in your heart that there is something good, a smile and hands that would. and i wonder is there Christ in your life. if there is not; then i would like to invite. YOU!!! it would be my delight. to give someone i like the gift of eternal life. love, your friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/28/2012 1:19:00 PM
A nice inspirational write inviting someone to join you in CHRIST. Nice one John. love phyl
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Date: 5/28/2012 5:05:00 AM
What a loving and inspirational note! x
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Date: 4/13/2012 1:40:00 PM
Hi John..Which female poet are you writing this to?..If it's Andrea, she'll be delighted! It blesses me to read a note of someone who sincerely wants to be evenly yoked..just think of all the problems that are potentially created when 2 of differing faiths become as one...complete and utter chaos. Great theme in this contest write, John. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/13/2012 1:45:00 PM
The note is to YOU!!!
Date: 4/6/2012 12:06:00 PM
Hi JOhn, keep this up and your book will be a reality before you know it. Love the message my friend! :)
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:48:00 PM
VERY well done, john, for that love note contest. So WHO is the lady? (don't ya have to say?)
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Date: 4/6/2012 12:15:00 PM
YOU!!!

Book: Shattered Sighs