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Ariana Grande’s in Manchester, she performs upon the stage Her music and singing appeals to fans of such a tender age Young fans sing along to the songs that they all know And when the concert’s finally over it's time for them to go But as they file out of the venue a terrorist’s bomb explodes It’s chaotic, there’s hysteria as their world suddenly implodes Medic’s rush to help the dying; and the injured they console The scene is an apocalypse, which has spiraled out of control A perpetual cacophony of sounds with people screaming and crying You don’t expect to attend a concert and end up with people dying There’s a kaleidoscope of colour from the emergency floodlight A hollow victory for terrorism on this unforgettable May night 8 word challenge 4 Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton 09-21-17 On May 22nd, 22 people lost their lives and 116 people were injured when a suicide bomb exploded as people left the Ariane Grande concert … the youngest victim was just 8 years old

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Date: 9/30/2017 1:23:00 PM
Jan , CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful and emotional poem. It was so sad.
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Date: 10/1/2017 4:59:00 PM
Thanks Constance it is such an emotional piece:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/29/2017 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations, Jan on your with with the beautiful couplet.
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Date: 10/1/2017 4:59:00 PM
Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/28/2017 5:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jan. Good poem about such a terrible event.
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Date: 10/1/2017 4:58:00 PM
Thanks Agnes it is an event I will never forget seeing on the TV:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 9/28/2017 4:50:00 PM
A very tragic event..Congrats on your win Jan
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Date: 10/1/2017 4:58:00 PM
Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/28/2017 12:47:00 PM
Terribly sad situation, but a very good way of utilizing the 8 words, enjoyed the rhyming couplets, congrats on another fine win Jan!
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Date: 10/1/2017 4:57:00 PM
Thanks you so much for the placement in the contest John I was so pleased I was able to weave this sad poem around your 8 words:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/23/2017 4:42:00 AM
Indeed an emotive write inspired by a happy event which ended terribly wrong. How can some people be so heartless and evil!! Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:14:00 AM
It was pre meditated murder which the perpetrator knew would have devastating consequences to his actions. I think this terrorist attack was one of the most heinous of crimes knowing that many children would be at the event. Absolutely heartbreaking:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 7:41:00 AM
Well written! Was a terrible thing to happen. One who sets out especially to kill the children are especially depraved!
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:26:00 AM
It was a heinous crime Kim:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 9/22/2017 7:37:00 AM
Great tribute to the victims of that terrible night, Jan:)
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:27:00 AM
Thanks Jo:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2017 11:26:00 PM
Excellent take on the challenge of the eight words ... A sure distinction win ... Interest in reading stays intact till the end comes with a feeling of satisfaction ...
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:27:00 AM
Thanks Probir. it wouldn't have been written without the contest prompt:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2017 7:42:00 PM
this is so well done, Jan, so very sad that something like this can happen.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/23/2017 5:28:00 AM
Absolutely devastating Eve, a night that they will remember for all the wrong reasons:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2017 7:02:00 PM
Such a horrifying event Jan, a tender respectful write dear, very much an unforgettable night. Best to you in the contest xomo
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Date: 9/21/2017 7:08:00 PM
Thanks Maureen I never know where my muse will take me and tonight its been 2 deep sad poems. I wasn't even going to write for the contest but when i was looking at the list this idea came and i had to go with it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2017 5:33:00 PM
Great coverage of a terrifying event, Jan. A BIG "Well Done."
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Date: 9/21/2017 5:36:00 PM
Thanks Lin, my muse is in a deep dark mood today I'm hoping she will be in a lighter mood tomorrow and the humour is back but I have no control over her she's a stroppy little madam at times lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/21/2017 5:10:00 PM
This is such a sad occurrence that I cried that night! To lose such a young child, I couldn't imagine! I loved your write about this occurrence however! You have written with pure emotion and filled the piece with amazing feelings of sadness! You touched my heart by your incredible poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/21/2017 5:23:00 PM
This heinous crime shocked the world Russell, the fact it was meticulously planned at an event where there were many young children beggars belief. I can't begin to imagine psychological damage that this event will have caused to so many people... a night that will never be forgotten but for all the wrong reasons:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 9/21/2017 5:07:00 PM
Hi Jan, it is so very sad that we humans can do such deeds as low a one could go , heart breaking :(
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Date: 9/21/2017 5:16:00 PM
There are no words i can use to describe the perpetrator of this heinous crime, its absolutely heartbreaking to think someone could mastermind such a despicable act Niall:-( hugs Jan xx

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