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The Night My Most Desired Time

The night, my most desired time in solitude draped in moonlight; on crisp cool grass, against a tall oak and its shivering leaves. Looking up at the vast heavens studded with luminous stars and drifting blue gray clouds. There is something restful about space, where land sprouts and meets the sapphire sky in its mystic splendor.
8/25/2019 Poetry Contest: Writing Challenge 3, August 2019- Five Lines- Sponsored by: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 8/31/2019 9:56:00 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Free Verse ~
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Date: 8/29/2019 7:30:00 AM
I love the beautiful imagery, Eve, unfortunately here in the city, we can't see many stars. Congrats on your win. Hugs, John
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:29:00 AM
- A truly beautiful poem, Eve - Congratulations on your win, well deserved 1st place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2019 12:49:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your great win. The second line is a gem.
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Date: 8/28/2019 7:27:00 PM
This is really beautiful. Love your win of mystic splendor.
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Date: 8/26/2019 11:55:00 AM
The beauty of the night perfectly captured :)
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Date: 8/25/2019 9:03:00 AM
Excellent imagery of luminous night, Eve.
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Date: 8/25/2019 8:25:00 AM
The aesthetic description of your desired hour is rich and lovely , Eve ...
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Date: 8/25/2019 7:54:00 AM
You have captured the essence of the cosmos in this magical, mystical write, Eve. Good luck in Constance's contest.
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Date: 8/25/2019 3:19:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous imagery Eve!:-) hugs jan xx
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