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I Had a Crush

An unproportional bottom. A tender upward structure. Well built to yield the temptation. Affirming to the mean walk. A glimpse is cuttingly perfect. For that point in time, that moment in life. A few and far between character. Those lips linger sweetness. That smile suggests love in-depth. The heart must be unbelievably huge. And the soul heavenly made. Devilish in such a manner. Sympathetic, yet never turns around. The sight cheers up a soul. Filling up a heart with joy. And painful joy, is it any good? She is never in a rush, Despite being the genesis Of all the evil in my mind. Deep inside my bones, A nervous surge is felt Can't help but sigh, just a little bit She turns to walk away, And off she's gone. I think about loosing, I don't know what. But that pesky myth. I had a crush. Contest: Not the God Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger Submitted on 11/07/2020

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Date: 4/25/2021 11:54:00 AM
I have had my share of crushes and I tend to agree with you. ;0)
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Date: 4/14/2021 2:04:00 PM
I was really drawn in by this title of your second post. A very interesting post and original imagery you used. I enjoy your creativity!
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Date: 5/6/2021 11:16:00 AM
Tha is for the encouraging comment dear Andrea. Blessings and thanks for. Checking out my page

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