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The Lottery of Love

You pick a number For better or for worse Never knowing What lies ahead Hoping for the best Done all you can Sometimes you win Sometimes you lose One thing for sure You can only win If you're in the game AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on November 9, 2019

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Date: 1/4/2020 7:19:00 AM
I enjoy your work and the reflective thought behind it. There is a smooth underlying flow to this piece where I find peace amongst the storm.
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Date: 1/4/2020 11:48:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Darrell. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/20/2019 5:58:00 AM
need to be lucky , and your number to come up
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Date: 11/20/2019 8:25:00 AM
It's partly a game of patience...
Date: 11/15/2019 8:52:00 AM
This is beautiful.. What a lovely poem.
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Date: 11/15/2019 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Funom. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/14/2019 11:45:00 AM
Two words: Real Talk!
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Date: 11/14/2019 4:00:00 PM
I hear you, Michelo - in a relationship you've got to be best friends with your mate.
Date: 11/10/2019 4:08:00 AM
I like how you have likened this to the lottery, for it truly is what it is.
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Date: 11/10/2019 7:13:00 AM
So true. Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 11/9/2019 10:50:00 PM
Everybody is praying for their wins, but usually forgetting to contest.. Nice thought..
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Date: 11/9/2019 11:15:00 PM
Thanks, Jenish.

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