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The Lost Generation

The lost generation. You see the blank stare in their eyes, just blank completely non-existent feelings... except for despair. You see them but they are not there. They dare not dream or have any hope as they feel that their dreams will not come true anyway. So they cut themselves with razors... they watch as the blood flows.. that's how they know... that they're alive. That's how they can feel alive... before they die... die too soon. They smoke the weed they smack the crack to dull the pain the sharp pain... of life's reality to escape for a while... so that they can feel something... Anything! Before they die! Die too soon! They ink their bodies, they dye their hair pink and green and blue, they try to shock you with their tattoos... they pierce their faces an act of pure defiance Saying Hey look at me! I dare you! So what do you do? You look... and say... "you won't get a job looking like that don't you know"! They reply "There aren't any jobs any more don't you know"... John Derek Hamilton February 17,2016

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Date: 4/3/2016 9:32:00 PM
Another good one that says it all about a lot of our youth today! Have to keep them in our prayers….including my 2 sons although they are not some of the extreme youth of today; just kind of down and out and confused about their future but not dying their hair or cutting or piercing themselves!
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:22:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/8/2016 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Funom for your visit and comment.
Date: 2/20/2016 7:20:00 PM
Very good write!
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/26/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thanks. Arthur. For your visit and kind comment. John
Date: 2/18/2016 3:21:00 PM
this is so painful but real for our young generation... a masterful, stirring write, john... huggs
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/18/2016 6:18:00 PM
Thanks Nette for your kind complimentary words always appreciated. John
Date: 2/17/2016 11:03:00 PM
Great, incisive commentary, with a strong, driving rhythm that is well-suited to the subject of youthful despair. You have deftly presented a complex social problem. Skillful write!
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/18/2016 6:17:00 PM
Thanks Brian for your kind words and recognition of the work it means a lot. Thanks John
Date: 2/17/2016 1:27:00 PM
Life lessons, longing for answers, still! Great eye opening message John!
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/18/2016 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Sarita for your visit and kind comment. John

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