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The last love letter to your girlfriend

when I die please my dear don t cry just look at the sky and say goodbye as your tears might break my heart just come and meet me for last although I m aware of your love but still just tell me for the last time that I love you, I love you it will make me feel better whether I remain in this world or not please live somewhere in me when I ll have my last sleep( I ll die) never stop coming in my dreams the love I ve for you is so deep whenever you ll remember me just eat my favourite ice cream i ll try to come in your dreams sometime by becoming an angel or a fly just promise me that whenever you ll see me in you sleep you ll not scream Never let my grave become dry always pour water on it as I might can t bare the heat always come to meet me and always went with a greet I might not be able to listen it but still it will make me feel better whenever the drops of rain hit you assume that they are me whenever the sun troubles you in the morning assume that the rays are me no matter if I say something or not just keep listening to me whether you see me or not never stop feeling me in your heart as no matter If I remain or not you was one of my biggest part of my heart this is all I ve to say to you, this is all I ve to say to you

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Date: 9/29/2017 11:04:00 AM
that was deep to very sweet poem :) expressed your words very well out spoken.
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Date: 8/6/2017 11:53:00 AM
Loved the poem. I could feel your emotions through each stanza. Just remember to keep on writing!!!!
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Date: 8/6/2017 10:24:00 AM
Love
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Date: 8/5/2017 6:52:00 AM
First off, WOW very well written and so deep. The only lines that I have to question is:* as I might can't bare the heat? * I might not be able to listen * you was one of my biggest part of my heart. I am not sure if you have type's or I may be able to give you very simple words to be fluent. Hope this helps. And I'm going to say your are a great poet.
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Date: 8/4/2017 1:20:00 PM
I always enjoy poems of deep emotion that have the balance of humor. I love that he assures her "whenever the drops of rain hit you" and "whenever the sun troubles you in the morning" that she should assume those annoying drops and rays are him! I would like to offer one possible change. The 8th line from the end might be better if it said "just keep listening FOR me" to show that he may or may not be present at any given moment! This is a fine poem which I enjoyed reading; thank you Faraz!
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Date: 8/3/2017 6:40:00 PM
Dear Faraz, thank you for your email. I'm not new to soup, but taking a long break for personal reasons. However, I enjoyed reading your poetry... very heartfelt and nicely crafted from your magical pen! Well done! Warm Regards, Ligella
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Date: 8/2/2017 2:47:00 AM
My favorite line is..."just eat my favourite icecream" so endearing! Great poem. My favorite icecream is mint chocolate moosetracks. Lol random FYI ;) Always, Laura
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Date: 8/1/2017 12:32:00 PM
Excellent 1'st class poem x
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Date: 8/1/2017 12:16:00 PM
It took me awhile to find your poetry.Okay.. this is a lovely love poem to give to your girlfriend she would like this poem.Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/1/2017 8:21:00 AM
Beautifully written Faraz. Instead of sadness, you celebrated the love in a very deep way. "When you remember me, just eat my favourite ice-cream" I enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 8/1/2017 6:25:00 AM
It is a beautiful poem about such deep feelings of love!
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Date: 7/31/2017 9:36:00 AM
This is very beautifully written. I could feel the love in these words. I was almost in tears reading this. Enjoyed the read! :)
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