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moonlight ... dancing on wave tops ... like a million silver doubloons, spilling filling the coffers of my dark heart, serene I breathe the glorious evening breeze pull it deep into the reach of my being as though it was my last ... and first … its warm summer magic cleanses my mind, pure and with but an instant spent, renews my very essence - worries cast to the deep like a black stone swallowed by the moment … and my reverie you ... are here, always unknown to you, your spirit haunts this place and greets me with this little miracle every time, day or night, that my feet touch this sand, you are beside me, quiet and peaceful - the sparkle in your eye, glinting the knowing half-smile, crimping your cheeks a waft of Je Reviens mixing with sea mist your fingers between mine in perfect symmetry and the excitement of the passion to come here … among the beam-softened dunes … this is summer to me these sultry evenings of romance immersed the in sounds and smells and sights of the sea those warm, moonlit tendrils that reach inside - that thrum the heartstrings and spirit that shake and squeeze the complacency from my being and make me feel so ... alive for as long as I draw breath and savor it YOU will walk with me at these times your memory will dance on the warm air of July your eyes will sparkle at me from the moon-daubed surf your lust for life will tickle the cool sand under my feet and all the warm months and oceans will whisper your name in my ear and spin the trembling chambers of my heart it is you - your spirit - that will always be my special joy my warm, vibrant, exciting anticipation of life my sweet, tender, seductive kiss ... of summer. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Pick 9, Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 6th Place ~ in the "Summer Fun" Poetry Contest, Nayday Ivette Negron, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 4/12/2020 6:12:00 PM
This is a romantic gem Greg. I see why it won first place. Congratulations my friend. I hope you are having a beautiful Easter. Blessings, Connie xxoo
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Date: 4/12/2020 2:53:00 PM
Greg, congratulations on your first place win with this romantic verse that takes us into warm summer nights with our feet in the sand by the water's edge.
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Date: 4/12/2020 12:18:00 PM
Greg - the sand, the sea, in summer, warm glow of a bonfire; this is my happy place. A wonderful, warm romantic piece. Enjoyed it very much. Congrats on your podium win today, Bard.
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Date: 8/16/2018 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Gregory with your beautifully written poem, thoroughly enjoyed reading. :))
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/20/2018 8:29:00 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Roy, and thank you so much, my friend, for your kind comments! :-)
Date: 8/15/2018 4:15:00 PM
Beautiful, Gregory. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/20/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thanks so much, Line - greatly appreciated! :-) <3
Date: 8/14/2018 11:22:00 PM
You did it again! Congratulations on your win. "Your memory will dance on the warm air of July..." Exquisite, tender and wistful. A fav. :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/20/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Susan, you are always so good to me, and your comments mean so much! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 8/14/2018 9:57:00 AM
Greg, such beautiful, romantic imagery of sweet love intermingled with nature's awesome gifts of summertime bliss! Congratulations on your win, my friend! Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/20/2018 8:27:00 AM
This is so nice of you, Sandra, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one ... it was a complete joy to write! Some you put more of yourself into than others, and this was a big chunk of my heart. Blessings, Dear Poet friend! :-) <3
Date: 6/15/2018 9:12:00 AM
INTOXICATING! Another superb offering from, "The Bard". I love it Greg:)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/16/2018 7:03:00 PM
I like the nickname, my friend ... I've been called many things, and most were not nearly as flattering, lol Many thanks and blessings, Brother! :-)
Date: 6/15/2018 8:28:00 AM
Wow! Very seductive, Gregory or is it Greg? A lovely piece.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/16/2018 7:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sylvia, I'm pleased you enjoyed it - and please call me Greg, my friend! (Or "The Bard" as I'm becoming known, thanks to my good friend and fellow poet, Danial Turner, above). Blessings! :-) <3

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