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Riding those demons Life lived totally In vain, destined to hell's fiery hot heat All life's good unclaimed Addicted life Cannot abstain Woes surround, choke sweet breath away Feelings drained Dear God help me now to abstain, Monster Slain!!
Written: August 22, 2019 Sponsor: Emile Pinet Contest: Eight Word Challenge

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Date: 9/16/2019 5:31:00 AM
Dear God help me now to abstain, Monster Slain!!///// yeah; sometime we really are our own enemy!!!
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Date: 9/10/2019 1:36:00 AM
unfortunately...with respect to 'seeing' ...we really are our own worst enemies
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/10/2019 4:53:00 PM
SB, Yes, we are our own worst enemies for sure. We do things that we would not want our family or friends to do for it might harm them. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 8/26/2019 11:27:00 AM
This is a very powerful Sara. Seen your name and just had to say a hello and hope all is well with you. love phyl
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/26/2019 2:42:00 PM
Phyllis, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate you dropping by. I fell and had like two hairline fractures of the pelvis. I feel that it is healed now but have some tenderness and pain from time to time still. Sara
Date: 8/23/2019 2:41:00 AM
You have done a fantastic job! I believe Emile will appreciate this one, Sara.
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Date: 8/23/2019 4:51:00 AM
Caren, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Date: 8/22/2019 2:20:00 PM
A powerful write, Sara! You did a great job of incorporating those chosen words in your poem, Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Kim
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2019 4:59:00 PM
Kim, Your encouragement is welcome. Thanks for dropping b y. Sara
Date: 8/22/2019 8:13:00 AM
... wooow, Sara ... powerful - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2019 4:59:00 PM
SS, Thanks for good luck wishes. Your presence is uplifting. Sara
Date: 8/22/2019 7:44:00 AM
Using special words is always a challenge. You did well.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2019 8:04:00 AM
Victor, My grandson said that he thought the picture is of a record album. What do you suppose that music is like? Thanks for dropping by. Sara