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J With Four Options Poetry Contest / Constance La France / 8-5-2025

“Should we deny our children pain, we would also deny them entry through many doors in their hearts and souls.” Poet Many cannot conceive truths the faithful believe, such as jagged edges lead us to deep places where tranquility waits to be reality. If only brains could disengage that souls alone decided what to leave behind or closely hold. When I stumble from life's roughness and bruises swell, I cannot help but deep dwell in my heart and soul where my injured bits sit ripped in cramped, frozen fits. If we do not hurt, we do not bleed a true need to learn which medical aids best persuade healings. Life often snags me in jagged edged episodes until I repair all frailty-stretched through prayer and place it in my Father's hands of perfect grace. The more jagged edges adhere, tagged for repair, the more need we build to yearn for and turn to God which grows awareness of our true depth caresses. Fear no roughness on your heart but recall toughness in your faith that will divinely define what gift the rift can bring forth, be it soul growth or knowledge. Jagged edges can teach us more than a college.

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Date: 8/6/2025 1:04:00 PM
Tremendous writing talent shown here, Caycay. Love what you did with assonance inside the lines of your unrhymed poem. A great, spiritual message in here!
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Date: 8/5/2025 11:41:00 PM
Wow, CayCay — this really hit home. I love how you tied the jagged parts of life to soul-deep growth and faith. That last line gave me chills (and a smile). So much truth here, and you said it all so beautifully.
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Date: 8/5/2025 10:26:00 PM
Dear CayCay, your poem is a beautiful and profound reflection on the role of pain and struggle in our lives.The idea is a powerful reminder that our challenges can shape us into stronger, wiser, and more compassionate individuals. I love how you weave together themes of faith, resilience, and personal growth,offering a message of hope and encouragement. Your words are a reminder that even in the midst of difficulty, there is always the potential for healing, learning, and transformation :) Anne
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Date: 8/5/2025 10:26:00 PM
Also I love the writing style! Exquisite writing!
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Date: 8/5/2025 10:00:00 PM
Love it all, CayCay. Amen. Meaningful poetry with much wisdom within, my friend. "Be thankful for all things." It sounds a bit scary, but He who is all-knowing, knows what He is doing. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill p.s. Good Luck in the contest!
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