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The Heavenly Blues Above

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Written in the Andaree Rhyme Form, created by Andrea Dietrich

There are mansions before you reach the gold gates where we will await our final fates, there are pillars and statues, with sweet garden views, of divine blues, and sunshine. We wait for the news, as heaven's angels peruse, this life: our life- with bliss each soul waits ... there are mansions before you reach the gold gates. ________________________ January 03, 2022 Poetry/Andaree/Rhyme/The Heavenly Blues Above Copyright Protected, ID 01-1514-158-03 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Your Choice 2023 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/05/2023 Tenth Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2023 5:46:00 PM

Fantastic, Constance. I need to tell you one little thing, but Joe needs dinner, so later, ok?? Thanks so much for using my form in this beautiful poem

Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2023 9:26:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the visit, comment, compliment, and help, I corrected my mistake now, love Constance

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/6/2023 6:37:00 AM

This is absolutely beautiful Constance. Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2023 9:31:00 AM

Linda, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and congratulations, Constance

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/5/2023 2:48:00 PM

Beautiful! Heartiest congratulations on your win, Constance:-)

Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2023 6:07:00 PM

Edward, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and congratulations, Constance

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/4/2023 6:42:00 PM

Heaven is an objective. We all picture it in different ways and a discription is always welcome in the poetic world. Good work.

Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2023 8:04:00 AM

John, thank you so much for the visit, yes, I agree, everyone has a different vision of Heaven, and this is mine, a place of beautiful temples, and gardens, that we experience even before we enter the golden gates, Constance

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/4/2023 6:35:00 AM

Very nice poem, Constance:)

Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2023 6:56:00 AM

Jo, thank you so much for the visit, and compliment. I am trying this form created by Andrea that I will be using for my next contest with her permission, with any theme, Constance

Stephan McBride

Date: 1/3/2023 6:12:00 PM

Jesus replied, “Anyone who loves me will obey my teaching. My Father will love them, and we will come to them and make our home with them. John 14:23 NIV One of my favorite verses which I love them all : ). We can't be good in our own works but through the rebirth process, We are not left as orphans but through Christ the spirit shall purify and clean one out ,for God's purpose through Christ was that His spirit could resurrect within us to save us from death now, sinful nature =death,love ya

Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2023 6:57:00 AM

Stephan, thank you so much for the visit, comment and for sharing that Bible verse, thank you, Constance

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/3/2023 5:04:00 PM

This is most creative Constance, winning wishes

Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2023 6:58:00 AM

Mystic, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and encouragement, Constance

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/3/2023 3:44:00 PM

So interesting, this poem... The picture you've painted 'at the gate' should inspire and uplift me. Why is it that I'm trembling. You've packed a real punch here, Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2023 7:02:00 AM

Gershon, thank you so much for the visit, compliment, and comment, I believe on the other side that we are given a choice to enter Heaven, or return to earth to live another life ... reborn a baby, Constance