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The Heaven

Mighty, calm and composed she lies, Like a sleeping queen of Arabia. The wind is blowing kindly and soft, Barring the rise of her waves in wrath. Besides the sea there lies a sand-dune, Twinkling in sun and flying in wind. Stars above are fewer than her grains, Whiter than the white, she looks so pure. Besides the hill there lies a garden, Fresh and beautiful, flowers she bear. Greenish meadows and cool air always She a beauty, the Garden of Eden. Besides the garden there lies a forest, Without any trees, full of buildings. Settings of sun made her beautiful, The golden city, then she is called. Above the city nearing the clouds, There lies a heaven, smaller than hell. An angel and two kids, opens the door Whenever the bell rings, for a new soul. It is my house and you are welcome, Six hundred and three, written outside. No need to die to reach our heaven, All are admitted, except the dead. Won third place in STRAND CHOICE any theme any form Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand Won fifth place in N-A rerun 4 Poetry Contest sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 1/20/2020 11:18:00 PM
Congrats, Jenish! Such lovely movement in your poem.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/20/2020 11:21:00 PM
Thank you Sam..It is my wife's favourite poem..
Date: 12/22/2019 3:29:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Jen
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/22/2019 10:27:00 PM
Thank you Gregory..
Date: 12/22/2019 3:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/22/2019 10:26:00 PM
Thank you Brenda..
Date: 12/22/2019 2:41:00 PM
Hello Jenish, congrats on placing in my contest, not sure if it received an N/A previously, but I'll let it slide, next time please follow contest directions, thanks!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/22/2019 10:26:00 PM
Thank you John.. It is my fault..I'll be careful next time..
Date: 12/1/2019 8:24:00 AM
I love this.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/1/2019 10:43:00 PM
I too love my little heaven.. Thanks..
Date: 10/14/2019 4:26:00 AM
That last line is beautiful! I also love the imagery which is very beautiful throughout the poem.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 10/14/2019 4:55:00 AM
Thank you Ada...

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