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The Greatest Gift

the greatest gift i ever recieved was for no one else just for me a music box from an old thrift store and a poem that made my heart soar two of the things that i loved most that let me know the she was surely taking notes it was christmas two years ago and those were the presents that let love show she had found a way to let me know that her love was something special and i should help it grow i smiled and looked at her and gave her a hug but not the kind you give a girl when you know that your in love that would come later

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Date: 12/24/2011 9:40:00 PM
John... a nice thing to dweel on..love~. Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
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John Loving Iii
Date: 12/26/2011 6:55:00 AM
it's called love eternal. john
Date: 12/23/2011 7:40:00 AM
This is lovely, did you realize it? I love the store of this poem. Happy holidays, John.
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Date: 12/23/2011 7:21:00 AM
Isn't it wonderful to receive John what our heart really desires and I hope that later the lady did receive the hug that told her you were in love! X Lizzie
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Date: 12/22/2011 10:18:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..Excellent personification..I enjoy those music box tunes also..I haven't read Waldon's Pond but will look at it..Maybe I can read some online to see if I would enjoy the book.Your presence at my work was uplifting...Sara
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Date: 12/21/2011 1:20:00 PM
Smile ˜ O tis sooo very sweeet ˜ You have a such a tenderness about your lovely heart, John ˜ Love always, John!:) ˜
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Date: 12/21/2011 12:56:00 PM
Just beautiful John iii. Those special gifts we always remember even as time swiftly flies by us. John I wish you a very Merry Christmas and A Happy Happy New Year my dear friend. Love, Carol
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