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The Gilded Leaves of Autumn

I hear the gilded leaves of autumn sigh As underneath the oak I seek repose, As if they sense that death is drawing nigh For sunlight wanes and veins begin to close. How often have I sat beneath your shade And bared the deepest secrets of my heart, You were our witness when true vows were made And through the passing years our love did chart. Sweet moments cherished here bring healing balm And rescue me from sorrow's deep despair. I close my eyes and feel a sense of calm As echoes of shared laughter fill the air. For there in my mind's eye I see your face, My sweetheart, husband, long-abiding friend, Pretend that I still feel your warm embrace, For such a loss is hard to comprehend. Yet just as gilded leaves of autumn fall The cycle of our life must run its course. And happy is the soul who at the call Is rooted in love's deepest, purest source. 08/09/18 Impress Me With An Old Poem (002) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Poet Destroyer A

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Date: 1/12/2020 1:12:00 PM
Wendy I love this! Should have placed higher! Congratulations on HM!;)
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Date: 10/24/2019 2:47:00 PM
Very touching words Wendy!! I love the title; Glided leaves of Autumn!! Beautifully penned!
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Date: 10/23/2019 9:51:00 AM
Wendy congratulations on your Podium Place in Brian's Blog Series with this lovely write !
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Date: 10/23/2019 8:39:00 AM
Wendy, this is even lovelier than when I first read it back in January :) ~Mark
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Date: 10/23/2019 8:28:00 AM
A lovely symbol of unchanging love. Best, SuZ
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Date: 6/10/2019 11:51:00 AM
This is beautiful Wendy, quite beautiful--congrats on your win.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/23/2019 4:50:00 AM
Thank you for your encouraging remark,L.J.
Date: 1/13/2019 4:38:00 AM
Wow, this is amazing, Wendy. It made me think of my late husbands and special times we shared. Congratulations on your well-earned win in Mark's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/23/2019 4:49:00 AM
Thank you so much,Carolyn. Thankfully this was fictional but true for many.
Date: 1/12/2019 5:28:00 PM
Wendy, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! EXCELLENT! Janice
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/23/2019 4:49:00 AM
Thank you for your kind remark,Janice.
Date: 1/12/2019 4:16:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Wendy. Superbly penned.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/23/2019 4:48:00 AM
Thank you for 'stopping by', Line.
Date: 1/12/2019 3:25:00 PM
Wendy, this is very poignant and beautiful. Congrats on your win on mile 10 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest! By continuing to place in the contest you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/23/2019 4:48:00 AM
What an honour! Thank you for your appreciation of my efforts,Mark.
Date: 10/1/2018 1:12:00 AM
Stunningly beautiful Wendy! Very deserving of your First placement! Congratulations! : )
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/7/2019 10:59:00 AM
Your feedback is much appreciated,Connie.
Date: 9/26/2018 6:36:00 AM
Lovely, Wendy. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/7/2019 10:58:00 AM
Thank you for your continued encouragement,Line.
Date: 9/24/2018 8:07:00 AM
Just adore this, Wendy ... exquisite imagery, wonderful description and rhythm, excellent phrasing and word usage, and such a poignant and tender theme ... superb work! Blessings! :-) <3
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/7/2019 10:58:00 AM
I'm honoured to receive such positive comments from you Greg. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 9/19/2018 8:17:00 PM
The oak becomes a witness to despair as the gilded leaves of autumn sigh..Congrats on your win Wendy..
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/7/2019 10:56:00 AM
Yes, and then a comfort as a place shared together. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment,Joseph.
Date: 9/19/2018 7:07:00 PM
Congrats Wendy, a pleasure to read :)
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/7/2019 10:55:00 AM
Thank you so much,Gary. This was fictional but I could imagine the pain of losing someone after many years of happiness.
Date: 9/19/2018 6:54:00 PM
This poem is excellent. I love it. Very well written Congratulations for your win :)
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/7/2019 10:53:00 AM
That's so kind of you,Heidi. It must be so painful to lose someone who has been in your life for so many years.
Date: 9/11/2018 4:07:00 PM
This was absolutely beautiful Wendy. It really touched my heart as I read it. I could picture that tree as if I were sitting beneath it myself. I loved this
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Wendy Watson
Date: 9/11/2018 4:23:00 PM
What wonderful comments, Chris. Thank you so much for sharing your feelings in this way. I am enjoying trying to be poetically creative! Trees would certainly reveal some interesting secrets if they could converse with us!
Date: 9/11/2018 9:52:00 AM
Oh, Wendy. This is just beautiful. I truly hope this was not your loss you refer to. This poem deserves some recognition. Good luck in your contest! Dean
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Wendy Watson
Date: 9/11/2018 4:17:00 PM
How kind of you Dean to give such positive feedback. Thankfully I was not speaking from personal experience in this case but appreciate what deep hurt others suffer in such situations and how important a special shared memory can be.
Date: 9/10/2018 6:19:00 PM
wow, Wendy. I would be flabbergasted not to see this one on the winners' list when the contest gets judged. It's absolutely marvelous.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 9/11/2018 4:15:00 PM
It's very kind of you to have read and commented with enthusiasm, Andrea. It means a lot to someone who is just starting out on this poetic venture! Thank you.
Date: 9/9/2018 12:17:00 PM
A well written verse Wendy, a loss of a loved one is painful and you're only left with good memeories. Good luck Tom
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Wendy Watson
Date: 9/9/2018 12:25:00 PM
I'm grateful for your encouraging comments, Tom. Thankfully this was not written from personal experience.

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