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The Flowers That Make Any Mother Smile

I wouldn't have loved anyone more than her, and it is no secret that flowers make any mother smile, when she takes them from two hands that care; I honored you, mother with my thoughtfulness and pride. Either in early adolescence or in late childhood: did I see a single trace of profound sadness while you gave me all those caresses and kisses when I was asleep in my warm and tidy bed. Beautiful and adorable mother, I was your gorgeous boy, and in all honesty, you must have loved me a bit more than the four girls who were lovable and obedient as I; and in all fairness, they equally shared that incredible love. Only your portrait can make that memory relive in your child; I stare at it and suddenly light comes flashing at me: the happiest and most radiant smile God ever created so lovingly... to make those tender eyes forever live in this smile of mine. Sweet and gentle mother, be that comforting angel who will embrace me when uncertainty and sorrow will make me desperately mourn; don't dry all these tears, but take them to the merciful Lord: as my gift of infinite gratitude and immense love that I express so deeply. Before I brought you crimson roses, the flowers that made any mother smile to thank you for your sacrifice and devotion: did you see your son's pride? Today I don't bring those roses, only yellow chrysanthemums to your grave: to embellish this unadorned tombstone on which I will pray, weep and grieve. Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 12/29/2015 11:55:00 PM
Andrew,, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Date: 12/28/2015 10:35:00 PM
Andrew, Congratulations in Judy Konos contest... wuv SKAT
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Date: 12/28/2015 2:01:00 PM
A lovely tribute Andrew congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/1/2010 11:19:00 PM
What a beautifully tender tribute to your mother, Andrew. Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest, too.
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Date: 1/19/2010 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your placement in John Heck’s “Love is in the Air” contest with this sad but wonderful tribute poem to your mother. It's easy to see why you won 1st place. Your poetic light is bright as is your love for your mother. Lovingly, Dane Ann.
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Date: 1/18/2010 2:12:00 PM
Congratulations on winning with your poem in honor of your mother. Joyce
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Date: 1/17/2010 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your FIRST place win in John's contest. It is truly deserved my dear friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2010 5:23:00 PM
Andrew, I'd never seen this, but it's quite obvious why you won first place. WHat a magnificent tribute to your mother. (and being the oldest daughter of 5, I too always felt my mom had just a wee bit of favoritism for me as well,though as you eloquently describe: in all fairness, they equally shared that incredible love... Andrea
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Date: 1/16/2010 10:52:00 AM
Andrew ~my friend Congratulations on your first place win I must say I am not to surprised seeing that I have loved your wonderful work for so long. A beautiful but sad written piece for your Mom! your poetry friend love Laura :)
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Date: 1/16/2010 9:05:00 AM
Andrew, many congratulations on your first place in John's contest, well desereved if i may say so, its a quite beautiful poem >> James
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Date: 1/16/2010 8:38:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win in John's Love Is In The Air contest. Very well deserved! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/16/2010 8:10:00 AM
A tearful, moving, and wonderful entry to the contest! Congratulations on your wonderful win, Andrew!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/16/2010 8:06:00 AM
Congrats on your success in John's contest.Rgds Brian You are on a roll Andrew.
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Date: 1/16/2010 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest "Love Is In The Air". The blanket for my mother's casket was red roses for it was her favorite flower and she wore a sweater with red rose buds. I understand this write very well. Sara
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Date: 1/16/2010 1:21:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful - so deeply touching, Andrew and so deserving of the first place win in John's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 5/8/2009 11:16:00 PM
A photo of my Mom and Dad sits atop my desk. I look at it every day to remind myself how lucky I was to have them. God bless you for sharing this warm tribute, Andrew. Unfortunately, my mother and father are buried more than a thousand miles away. If not for this, I would be inspired by your poem to put chrysanthemums on their graves. So sad right now, forgive me. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/8/2009 8:03:00 AM
This touches me with the longing and the memories of my own mother. No matter how much time has passed, we never stop missing those loving arms.
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Date: 5/8/2009 6:17:00 AM
Andrew deep and personal wonderfully penned Poetry - You can bet her essence is smiling at the thought - God Bless, MJ
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