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The Father of All Light!...

"Draw near unto God and He will draw near unto you. Resist the devil, and he shall flee from you...." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ The Book of James Chapter 4 ~ Silken slivers.... Aside the rolling sea Falling from the stars Beyond these swaying trees Shadows playing, now Beneath their dancing leaves Twirling toward the waiting ground Amid this summer's breeze Moonbeams.... Splashing upon their canvas Colliding, with the darkened skies Celestial colors of heavenly wonder These painting's, before my eyes Turning toward whispers, now Which penetrate the night Echoes of Angelic splendor Gliding, atop the timeless tide.... Twinkle twinkle, you silken stars Now I know, just who, you are! Walking toward the shoreline From beneath these swaying trees Endless lights of wisdom Amid this summers breeze Truth, beyond the horizon Within this place I've seen And heard Angelic voices Whisper, 'Your Name' inside of me "The Father of All Creation!".... ...............My Soul............. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Now waltzing, upon, 'Your Sea!'~

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Diane Christian

Date: 10/31/2008 8:13:00 AM

this is beautiful written, the father of all light, he will take us beyond our galaxy, wow how majestic it wil be just like the words in your poem, and thanks for your feed back on my poems, we all doing just great here in uk. my husband just bought a new staff, God bless you from diane

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/28/2008 3:18:00 AM

Beautiful word-painting, John, I could see it all brillinatly. Lovely! Kristin

Deneen White

Date: 10/27/2008 6:25:00 PM

this springs to mind a beautiful and poetic write, the imagery is just magnificent, thank you Mr. John Rhinem, for all of your comments, take care D-nyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/27/2008 12:53:00 PM

This is beautiful John! Seems as if I am looking into a magnificent painting by an amazing artist. As always, you are an artist with your words, they are brilliant as the stars of which you speak! Glorious poetry! :) makes me smile! ~ Carrie

Christy Hardy

Date: 10/27/2008 12:48:00 PM

This is such a vivid write, a masterpiece, you are a wonderful poet, Always, Christy

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 10/27/2008 12:38:00 PM

I would like to thank you John for all your comments, for taking the time to read and the time to write.... thank you. In fact you have inspired a poem in a round about way... but if you check it out you'll catch a dedication................... thank you again John.. so much

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 10/27/2008 12:35:00 PM

Splashing upon their canvas Colliding, with the darkened skies Celestial colors of heavenly wonder These painting's, before my eyes Turning toward whispers, now Which penetrate the night Echoes of Angelic splendor Gliding, atop the timeless tide.... Hello Brother John.. speechless.. ( above lines ) .. a master piece John, in all, but these lines are, well amazing.. Fluid to read a "marked" sense of description and still has that singular Rhinem tempo......