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The Eye Of God

A cloud of dust, and gas in a star filled night sky; giant nebula stars in space are thrust, one is seen as an eye. Oh, is this the eye of God watching us each day, has he been watching me when on my knees I pray; as a small happy child at play, as a girl, a woman shattered by life and lost. A sun like star, of intricate patterns pretty; a place where new born stars created are, until it explodes- oh pity. but now God's eye watches me from light years away, the eye sees all and knows it when I go astray; and I know for my life- will stay, this eye of God knows my every earthly scar. _____________________________ June 3, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/The Eye of God Copyright Protected, ID 19-1149-699-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Nifty Name Nebula's sponsor, William Kekaula, Inspiration #3 The Eye of God Sixth Place

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Date: 10/26/2019 10:47:00 PM
Beautiful BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/26/2019 11:15:00 PM
James, thanks so much for the beautiful!
Date: 6/14/2019 10:50:00 AM
Beautifully written, Constance, congrats on your win. John
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Constance La France
Date: 6/14/2019 1:32:00 PM
John, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats , appreciate ~
Date: 6/13/2019 10:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Constance. Well done.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2019 10:54:00 AM
Line, thanks for the congrats!
Date: 6/12/2019 9:43:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! I'm personally blessed by this poem of yours that reveals God's omnipresence. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2019 7:32:00 AM
Beata, thank you for your kind words and for the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 6/12/2019 6:17:00 PM
A beautiful write Constance, on a subject close to my heart, indeed God is watching over us all through our life, glad you chose this one and did it justice!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2019 7:33:00 AM
John, thank you for the beautiful and the compliment, appreciate ~
Date: 6/12/2019 6:16:00 PM
Constance, I am so happy to see this beautiful poem placed high! Yay! Kudos on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2019 7:33:00 AM
Connie, thanks for the beautiful and the kudo's ~
Date: 6/12/2019 2:05:00 PM
Constance, you have attached soul with stars emerging within the ever growing expanse of our universe, and to that end, I would like to add my personal heartfelt thanks for gracing your awesome rendering within this contest that was made possible by the PoetrySoup members, as a place to be solely recognized and honored by its community of fellow poets, Aloha always, William Kekaula
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Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2019 5:26:00 PM
William, thanks for that interesting contest and for my fine placement, appreciate so much and for the nice comment ~
Date: 6/12/2019 2:23:00 AM
One cannot help but think of this nebula as the eye of God watching over us...seeing all. You have written a beautiful entry Constance. I hope this lovely poem is a top winner my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/12/2019 7:58:00 AM
Connie, well it sure looks like an eye ! Thanks for the compliment and encouragement, yes I hope William likes my poem too !

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