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The End of the Road

My love, we'll dance beneath palms no more Nor raise our glass of exaltation again Our windswept footprints leave our barren shore And the sun will set, for tears to be hidden in Parting brings sadness when the road ends Its final destination leaves nowhere to turn To darkness, in silence, our love descends These flame burned ashes our only concern To weave darkness into a cloak to be worn A garment of loneliness sown from love's death To hang on shoulders of yearning without scorn With the hearts departure from love's last breath Could love have revealed its terrible pain Before bonding passionate hearts such as ours To drift away without reasons to explain Time and loneliness always devourers To falter without design when roads bend And love has quietly moved farther apart To bear this weight of failure a distant friend We'll kiss goodbye to yesterday as we part 1/2/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/19/2017 9:53:00 AM
Hi Frederic, Congratulations on your top win . It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 1/17/2017 1:04:00 PM
A most deserving victory Frederic, congratulations...
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Date: 1/17/2017 10:44:00 AM
Well done! Congratulations.
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Date: 1/16/2017 11:41:00 AM
A beautifully sad write Frederic.
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Date: 1/16/2017 1:23:00 AM
A great write....congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/15/2017 8:53:00 PM
Difficult circumstances require separation at times. Well-written. Congrats on your placement and on a fine piece, Frederic
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Date: 1/15/2017 7:19:00 PM
So very sadly beautiful, and well-written, Frederic. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Win! 7 Sandra
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Date: 1/15/2017 4:43:00 PM
Wow a poetic masterpiece no wonder it won, congrats on the win Frederick!
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Date: 1/15/2017 4:33:00 PM
Back to say Congratulations Frederic Great job!
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Date: 1/5/2017 8:14:00 PM
Wow! No one can make such tragedy quite as beautiful as you dear friend.. I have not been able to be on soup in a while and have truly missed reading your brilliant poetry.. Case in point, the third stanza is truly masterful.. Always a fan.. Arlene
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Date: 1/4/2017 8:00:00 AM
A sad take on this challenge and I love how you used sadness so beautifully here. I see a win in this gem!!
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Date: 1/2/2017 8:44:00 PM
Bittersweet, Frederic. It would seem love finds it's own path. Happy New Year my poetic friend:)
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