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The End of An Autumn Day

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Eventide approaches, with beauty in the air. Soft breeze blow with graceful gladness. A slight zephyr blew throughout the trees, As lads kick at leaves of various hues. But now the day is over and all feel hungry, Arriving home, the smell of squash and garlic, a homely pumpkin soup, a crusty bread, cheeses of all types, and roast lamb or beef. Fully satiated, all repair for a goodnight's sleep, in barns, tents or beds provided for comely spouses. Oh, would that autumn never end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/8/2022 1:16:00 AM
A beautiful autumn evening wound off with a lovely dinner and peaceful sleep!Really enjoyed !
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Date: 10/6/2021 2:46:00 AM
Hi Victor, I echo what Delice said. Pumpkin soup? I never had it, but it sounds interesting. Well done. I appreciate your continued support. Have a great day:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/30/2021 8:33:00 AM
The food sounds mouth-wateringly good Victor...Delice
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Date: 9/30/2021 6:03:00 AM
Lovely... my favorite season of them all, even though all of them are glorious. God bless you, Victor. Love in Christ, Gina
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Date: 9/29/2021 9:12:00 PM
Great imagery and setting for a day. Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 9/29/2021 2:33:00 PM
Victor, don’t let sleep come yet…I’ll be right there to let my weary body enjoy the food and neighborhood feel of crinkling fallen leaves’ atmosphere. Thank you for sharing these engaging lines from the environment of your being. I relished in them. Routing blessings your way xox. sally
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Date: 9/29/2021 1:32:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 9/29/2021 12:15:00 PM
- I enjoy your autumn poem, Victor ... with delicious smell and taste ... autumn gifts ... and beautiful colors :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2021 10:53:00 AM
"Eventide approaches, with beauty in the air." This verse is beautiful and pleasant to read, and the rich imagery is captivating. Blessings, Evelyn :)
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Date: 9/29/2021 10:14:00 AM
Enchanting lines, Victor.
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Date: 9/29/2021 1:44:00 AM
Tranquil calm! Soothing. Great write, Victor!
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Date: 9/28/2021 10:56:00 PM
Nice and peaceful, Victor, calm scene that wants me to be there:)
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Date: 9/28/2021 10:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem, I am not here as much but enjoy reading some of my favorite poets!
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Date: 9/28/2021 2:37:00 PM
Today's writing is yet another masterpiece, Victor. I enjoy the beauty of each season on its own, and I have to admit that this is my favorite time of year as well. When one thing ceases to exist, and another begins to take its place. Everything is at its most vibrant and peaceful this time of year!
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Date: 9/28/2021 12:57:00 PM
The most colorful of seasons. To me every season is beautiful in it's own way and as each season passes and a new one begins I think THIS is my favorite season. Then when it's over I think the same of the next. Love the changes. Good stuff here my friend. As always. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/28/2021 12:53:00 PM
My favourite season Victor, love the imagery. Tom
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