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The Drifters...

One by one they drift away... And now there`s nothing left to say... Now they all go their seperate ways... Will they reunite one day...?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/15/2009 9:20:00 AM
i like this alot its got good flow. though where im from drifters are what we call the run-a-ways....people who go from one place to another, sometimes even after their 18. thats basically the drifters to us...again i really enjoyed this peice you have alot of tallent =] good luck xo Rain
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Date: 9/21/2009 5:12:00 PM
Kool piece Priscilla>>James
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Date: 9/19/2009 12:42:00 PM
I like the flow of this one and the short story is complete... Good Write... MoonBee
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Date: 9/17/2009 4:26:00 PM
perhaps....like dandilion seeds! with all their little projections...Light & Love
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Date: 9/17/2009 12:22:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Priscilla. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2009 9:29:00 AM
excellent write ...and they will meet again! :-)
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Date: 9/17/2009 5:35:00 AM
Good question phrased as a poem. Keep writing. Sara
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