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The miles, they roll between us the highway speeding across death contemplate with each last breath why we live our worlds apart The door that stands between us the threshold we won’t dare cross the reasons pain us, we’re at a loss as we live our worlds apart The seasons slip between us the howling winds that blow the summer rain, the wintry snow and time’s the distance keeping us apart Submitted on May 13, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND AP: 3rd place 2022 Posted on May 12, 2022

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Date: 5/14/2022 4:48:00 AM
Lovely poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/14/2022 12:36:00 PM
Thank you very much ~
Date: 5/13/2022 9:34:00 AM
Nice poem. I like the line, "the treshold we dare not cross."
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/14/2022 12:36:00 PM
Thanks, Mike. Much appreciated ~

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