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THE DEATH of MARY BETH-

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Mary Beth, has gone home,
breath has left her body.
left as her spirit roams...

 

Constant grief hurting suffering soul, dormant the mystical enchantment tolls. wanton division of moderate goals, content physically now takes its toll; ~ Beth, has gone home, breath has left her body. left as her spirit roams; cleft so sadly mine heart embody
~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Writing Prompt - Let's Write A Lento" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart, Judge & Sponsor. 2/3/20 Written words by James Edward Lee Sr.2020© For Writing Prompt- Let's Write a Lento- Poetry Contest Lento poetry form only. Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Date: 2/10/2020 2:01:00 PM
James, nice image ! Congratulations on your win in my Lento writing prompt challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 2/11/2020 8:56:00 AM
Thank you, ever so much ~Constance
Date: 2/9/2020 1:04:00 PM
a haunting one, James. Loved also the picture you put with it and your unique formatting separating the lines the way you did. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 2/9/2020 4:33:00 PM
Thanks ever so much Andrea. Blessings to you and yours.. Write on! James