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The Day My Lover Left-Contest

It's a cold and hollow feeling When reality arrives A lost foreboding emptiness That gnaws at your insides A last goodbye can't really mean That all is at an end What words to change this torment Even if, but to pretend A word in anger said in haste Has all but robbed of me The treasure of fulfillment For all this love could be What value gained from hurt and pain In choices to impose If but my heart could change this fate With the music of this prose. 03/15/2016

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Date: 4/16/2016 11:00:00 PM
Charlie. Congrats on your great win.... LINDA
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Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2016 11:58:00 PM
Thanks for your kindness Linda...
Date: 4/13/2016 12:58:00 PM
Charlie, Congrats on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest **SKAT**
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Date: 4/13/2016 2:01:00 PM
Thank you for sponsoring Skat, it was an honor to be mentioned...
Date: 3/16/2016 7:41:00 PM
Beautiful! Can really feel the hurt and strong emotions.
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Date: 3/16/2016 7:55:00 PM
Your words are most kind. Thank you Christine for sharing your time with me...
Date: 3/16/2016 5:55:00 PM
Once words are said in anger it is not easy to repair the harm done, but where true love exists, an apology could do the trick! Enjoyed this poem, Charlie; I think your lover should read it! ~ paul
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/16/2016 6:05:00 PM
Simply written for the contest Paul, the Love of my life is forever by my side. Not that I haven't used apologies for the many stupid things spewed out of my mouth. You are exactly right. Thanks again.
Date: 3/16/2016 3:41:00 PM
Nice and emotional write...
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/16/2016 5:24:00 PM
Thank you Meenakshi...
Date: 3/16/2016 9:04:00 AM
wow well written
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/16/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Busani, for the encouragement
Date: 3/15/2016 9:59:00 PM
Charlie, this has happened to everyone, a word said in anger or haste, a mistake unable to take back, been there, did that, you have to just turn the page sometimes and let it go, wonderful write, 7 ~
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/15/2016 10:05:00 PM
A word of kindness always shines a ray, thanks B/W
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/15/2016 10:03:00 PM

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