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The Dawn Cries With Dew

The dawn cries with dew Every time I think of you The sweet inspiration Never came to fruition Smiles dancing in the sky Now, I just wonder why The comfort in the air With beauty everywhere Drifted with separation Surpassing the elation Whispers and wonder Without any thunder Now, time has passed In the river, didn’t last Memory floats through - I miss you - Heidi Sands 6/16/18

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Date: 6/17/2018 8:36:00 AM
Just love this title, Heidi, to see or feel that natures cries with us, Love it xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2018 8:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike. I appreciate all your support, always :)
Date: 6/16/2018 5:16:00 PM
A sad write Heidi..well expressed
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 5:18:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 6/16/2018 9:43:00 AM
A sentimental journey..enjoyed reading it..well written poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 9:46:00 AM
It is great to hear you enjoyed it. Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 6/16/2018 8:18:00 AM
Heidi, I enjoyed your sad write. It reminds to cherish any day where you are in a romantic relationship.. you never know how things might end.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 8:33:00 AM
I am happy to hear you enjoyed this Chance. Yes, cherish every moment you have with close ones :) Thank you for your comment !

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