The Darkest Day

Billows of Darkness Surrounding a Broken Heart Breathe deep smothered LOVE

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Date: 2/15/2012 10:48:00 PM

This poem I can surely relate to. I enjoyed this one. Thanks. I hope everything is well. Always, Laura

Date: 11/23/2010 6:22:00 PM

I know this day for you. Very sad.

Date: 4/2/2009 8:47:00 AM

Superb 'b' alliteration... and the assonance of 'smothered love' is most effective. Great title! Best wishes, Keith

Date: 3/25/2009 2:01:00 AM

Forlorn writing, I write with Raul, he's a friend of mine and he has told me of your work. Great stuff.

Date: 3/22/2009 6:23:00 PM

very good....it Be-utiful....Love Faire

Date: 3/18/2009 11:41:00 PM

Another great write HGarvey. You certainly have a way with words....

Date: 3/18/2009 10:46:00 PM

Amazing work HG, nice flow and great senryu...Raul

Date: 3/18/2009 9:37:00 PM

HG, this is so beautiful! I am sending you a Soup Mail shortly.

Date: 3/17/2009 11:32:00 AM

The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Nice use of alliteration. Keep on writing! Karen

Date: 3/17/2009 5:56:00 AM

Wow, I do so feel this dark, dark write. You are such an amazing poet. Love, Shar

Date: 3/17/2009 5:38:00 AM

thats a really good senryu... and love the last line... ~ Arany

Date: 3/17/2009 5:28:00 AM

takes my breath-away!!! really!!!!!!!! great wow! cool! Jim